Formal vs Informal Language THE COMMANDMENTS OF FORMAL

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Formal vs. Informal Language THE COMMANDMENTS OF FORMAL WRITING

Formal vs. Informal Language THE COMMANDMENTS OF FORMAL WRITING

What is wrong with these brides?

What is wrong with these brides?

Gross Writing I Saw This Week Lol Can’t Cause I think He was so

Gross Writing I Saw This Week Lol Can’t Cause I think He was so stupid

Formal and Informal Writing INFORMAL USAGE every day casual relaxed friends/family social media no

Formal and Informal Writing INFORMAL USAGE every day casual relaxed friends/family social media no strict rules (don't care much about applying grammar rules ) Academic Setting ◦ Reports ◦ Essays Business Setting ◦ Letters ◦ Interviews ◦ Emails ◦ Reports ◦ Manipulation

Informal--Words to Avoid 1 st Person, 2 nd Person, or Personal Pronouns (We, I,

Informal--Words to Avoid 1 st Person, 2 nd Person, or Personal Pronouns (We, I, You) Instead use 3 rd Person: A person, an individual, one Contractions ---I’m, didn’t, can’t Instead use I am, did not, cannot Slang , Cliches, Text Lingo Examples: Easier said than done, lol, Rosaline friendzoned Romeo, Abbreviations and Symbols Examples: &, asap, cause

Example 1 Informal: I think that it's really bad that students have to do

Example 1 Informal: I think that it's really bad that students have to do so much homework all the time.

Example 1 Formal: � Many people, specifically students, feel that it is unfair that

Example 1 Formal: � Many people, specifically students, feel that it is unfair that they receive a surplus of homework each day.

Example 2 Informal: When you look at bacteria through a microscope, it might seem

Example 2 Informal: When you look at bacteria through a microscope, it might seem like nothing, but its effects are really bad if you're exposed to it directly. (Ms. Smolko is not looking at bacteria currently)

Example 2 Formal: If an individual observes bacteria through a microscope, one might find

Example 2 Formal: If an individual observes bacteria through a microscope, one might find that it appears harmless. However, individuals exposed to bacteria have a higher likelihood of contracting the harmful effects, such as an illness.

Word Usage Formal: A formal tone uses more complex, precise adjectives, nouns, verbs Examples:

Word Usage Formal: A formal tone uses more complex, precise adjectives, nouns, verbs Examples: good superior use utilize some things some reasons

Forbidden Words Good Bad Things Stuff A lot/ alot Beautiful Terrible Pretty Nice Said

Forbidden Words Good Bad Things Stuff A lot/ alot Beautiful Terrible Pretty Nice Said Ugly Really Very

Word Usage Hesitation fillers: well let me think hmm Like er Informal Well, this

Word Usage Hesitation fillers: well let me think hmm Like er Informal Well, this experience is one I will never forget. Formal Therefore, this is an experience I will never forget.

Example 3 Informal: When you're thinking about how to solve a geometry problem, that's

Example 3 Informal: When you're thinking about how to solve a geometry problem, that's your brain in action. It doesn't help you remember things, it also contains your memory, both long-term and short-term. (Ms. Smolko has never once thought about solving a geometry problem)

Example 3 Formal: For instance, when a person attempts to solve a challenging question,

Example 3 Formal: For instance, when a person attempts to solve a challenging question, the brain is processing, and retrieving, the information necessary to solve the question. The brain does not only store prior knowledge or information, it also contains a person's memory, both long- and short-term.

Additional Phrases to Avoid Past Tense Verbs: • “The author argued that juveniles should

Additional Phrases to Avoid Past Tense Verbs: • “The author argued that juveniles should not be trialed as adults. ” Essay Introductions: • “In this essay, I chose to write about the effects of pollution. ” Rhetorical Questions: • Who needs them?