Wednesday Today we are going to retell your

Wednesday Today we are going to retell your innovated story of The Papaya That Spoke

Task 1 - make a list of top ticks will you use to write your story?

Here are some of the Top Ticks I might use: Use speed word spellings accurately Use inverted commas to punctuate speech Include exclamation and question sentences Organise your writing into paragraphs Use expanded noun phrases, adverbs and fronted adverbial phrases to add description ü Extension task: can you be an illustrator and draw a front cover for your story? ü ü ü Read my example on the next slide.

Speed words

Task 2 – write your innovated story using your plan from yesterday. Here is an example of a beginning As the sun rose one misty morning, a fisherwoman opened her front door. She was kind and caring and popular with everyone. With the sun beating down her long, brown hair she laughed as she heard her tummy rumble. I must have breakfast, she thought to herself. Singing as she went she skipped into her garden until she reached the pineapple tree. Cautiously, so not to scratch herself on the pineapple, she gently pulled down a fresh, juicy pineapple. To her astonishment the pineapple screeched “hands off!” “Did you say that? ” the fisherwoman questioned her cat. “No, ” he replied looking puzzled “it was the pineapple!” “Whhhhhhhaaaaat!” screamed the fisherwoman as she ran off down the beach.