Foolish Fragments and Ridiculous RunOns What is a

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Foolish Fragments and Ridiculous Run-Ons!

Foolish Fragments and Ridiculous Run-Ons!

What is a complete sentence? A SENTENCE is made up of one or more

What is a complete sentence? A SENTENCE is made up of one or more words that express a complete thought. A sentence begins with a capital letter and ends with punctuation. Good writers write with complete sentences!

What does a complete sentence need? A sentence must have FOUR things: 1. It

What does a complete sentence need? A sentence must have FOUR things: 1. It must begin with a capital letter. 2. It must end with punctuation– either a period (. ), exclamation point (!), or question mark (? ). 3. It must have a subject and a verb. 4. It must be a complete thought.

Capitalize! It must begin with a capital letter. Ex. A bumblebee flew into Peter’s

Capitalize! It must begin with a capital letter. Ex. A bumblebee flew into Peter’s open mouth.

Proper Punctuation It must end with punctuation– either a period (. ), exclamation point

Proper Punctuation It must end with punctuation– either a period (. ), exclamation point (!), or question mark (? ) Ex: A bumblebee flew into Peter’s open mouth! Did a bumblebee just fly into Peter’s open mouth?

Subject and Verb It must have a subject and a verb A subject is

Subject and Verb It must have a subject and a verb A subject is the “who” of a sentence. A verb is the “what” of a sentence. Ex: A bumblebee (subject) flew (verb) into Peter’s open mouth. Mrs. Bensley (subject) enjoys (verb) playing with her dog Lady.

Complete Thoughts It must be a complete thought. Ex: When Peter opened his mouth.

Complete Thoughts It must be a complete thought. Ex: When Peter opened his mouth. (INCOMPLETE THOUGHT) When Peter opened his mouth, a bumblebee flew in. (COMPLETE THOUGHT)

Fragments and Run-On Sentence Sometimes sentences can either be incomplete or too long. Incomplete

Fragments and Run-On Sentence Sometimes sentences can either be incomplete or too long. Incomplete sentences are called sentence fragments. Sentences that are too long are called run-on sentences.

Sentence Fragments In order to make sure you do not have a sentence fragment,

Sentence Fragments In order to make sure you do not have a sentence fragment, you should always look for the “who” and “what” of your sentence (the subject and verb!). If one is missing, you have a sentence fragment.

Sentence Fragments Examples: Incorrect: Went to the store to buy brownie mix. (no subject!)

Sentence Fragments Examples: Incorrect: Went to the store to buy brownie mix. (no subject!) Correct: My dad went to the store to buy brownie mix. (subject added!) Incorrect: Brownie mix at the store expensive. (no verb!) Correct: Brownie mix at the store was expensive. (verb added!)

Run-On Sentences A run-on sentence is one that rambles. It combines two or more

Run-On Sentences A run-on sentence is one that rambles. It combines two or more sentences into one without proper punctuation. There are two ways to correct a run-on sentence. - Break it up into two complete sentences - Use a comma and a coordinating conjunction

Run-On Sentences Example: The grocery store was really packed with people there must have

Run-On Sentences Example: The grocery store was really packed with people there must have been a big sale today. Correction: The grocery store was really packed with people. There must have been a big sale today. ^For this correction, I simply broke the run-on sentence into two complete sentences.

Run-On Sentences The second way to correct a run-on sentence is by using a

Run-On Sentences The second way to correct a run-on sentence is by using a comma (, ) followed by coordinating conjunction. Coordinating conjunctions: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so To remember coordinating conjunctions, just remember FANBOYS (For, And, But, Or, Yet, So)

Examples Run-On: The grocery store was really packed with people there must have been

Examples Run-On: The grocery store was really packed with people there must have been a big sale. Correction: The grocery store was really packed with people, so there must have been a big sale. Run On: I really wanted to go to the fair but I had a lot of homework. Correction: I really wanted to go to the fair , but I had a lot of homework

Let’s practice! Determine if the example sentences are complete sentences, run on sentences, or

Let’s practice! Determine if the example sentences are complete sentences, run on sentences, or sentence fragments.

1 Which was built in 1950 Sentence, fragment, or run-on?

1 Which was built in 1950 Sentence, fragment, or run-on?

2 Needed the materials for the science project. Sentence, fragment, or run-on?

2 Needed the materials for the science project. Sentence, fragment, or run-on?

3 Bertha gave me a computer for my birthday last week. Sentence, fragment, or

3 Bertha gave me a computer for my birthday last week. Sentence, fragment, or run-on?

4 I was talking on the phone for a couple of house last night

4 I was talking on the phone for a couple of house last night I forgot to do my homework. Sentence, fragment, or run-on?

5 When we adopted the cutest puppy at the animal shelter. Sentence, fragment, or

5 When we adopted the cutest puppy at the animal shelter. Sentence, fragment, or run-on?

6 The little boy’s toy car was yellow, his sister had a red and

6 The little boy’s toy car was yellow, his sister had a red and white toy truck. Sentence, fragment, or run-on?

7 Carlos is the team captain on the football team, and he plays defensive

7 Carlos is the team captain on the football team, and he plays defensive tackle. Sentence, fragment, or run-on?

8 Lifting the heavy boxes, I hurt my back. Sentence, fragment, or run-on?

8 Lifting the heavy boxes, I hurt my back. Sentence, fragment, or run-on?

9 After I dribbled the ball down the court. Sentence, fragment, or run-on?

9 After I dribbled the ball down the court. Sentence, fragment, or run-on?

10 She won the spelling contest and she will go to the regional level

10 She won the spelling contest and she will go to the regional level next month. Sentence, fragment, or run-on?