Writing a Paragraph Outline Reminder Whats the difference

Writing a Paragraph Outline

Reminder: What’s the difference between a “Topic Outline” and a “Paragraph Outline”? A “topic outline” is the name I made up for an outline that is like a Table of Contents A “paragraph outline” is the name for an outline that outlines your essay by paragraph **The difference between the two: -your topic outline only has a topic sentence explaining the main idea of the paragraph included– typically 1 page -your paragraph outline is full of information you will be including in your actual paragraph (like evidence, discussion, analysis, etc. )– typically multiple pages

How to get started with your Paragraph Outline 1. Start with your Topic Outline **if you did your topic outline correctly this work should be the start of your Paragraph Outline 2. Next you should pull out all your research and notes you have taken so far **look for evidence that supports the main ideas you have chosen for the body paragraphs 3. Begin writing commentary, evidence & discussion points under the main idea sentences

Marketing to Kids Is Corporate America’s desire to increase profits by marketing to kids having a negative affect on today’s kids? I. Introduction use Ellen Bell example—funny email of 2007 technology has change the way that corporate America targets kids marketing companies have discovered that “kids” control much of the spending in their homes Thesis: II. Background Information marketing in the early 1900’s focused on men, 19050’s focused on women, 2000’s now focuses on children +$80 billion dollars are spent on children every year since 2012 (Jones)

Marketing to Kids Is Corporate America’s desire to increase profits by marketing to kids having a negative affect on today’s kids? III. The unreal images and expensive clothing promoted by advertisers has a great affect on the self image of young people. Companies focus on the ego of young people to try to find ways to get them to buy their products, especially clothing. + “Narcissism and entitlement among college students are at an all time high” (Nava) +82% of all reality stars are paid by advertisers to wear clothes they want marketed to young people. (Newsweek study) Companies promote people for today’s youth to “emulate” despite their moral defects and push the focus onto their clothing and accessories. + “Kim Kardashian’s popularity is directly tied to manipulative marketing. She is the prime example of someone who is popular for doing nothing. ” (Walker 4)