WHICH IS BETTER Tell me which introduction is
WHICH IS BETTER? Tell me which introduction is better for my essay!
Main Topic: Seismology I want to write about earthquakes. I already found enough information for my essay. Now I have to get my readers to CARE about what I’m writing about. I can start my introduction paragraph with… ◦ A question I want my reader to ponder ◦ A fact I want my reader to know before my essay starts ◦ An observation or something I noticed about my topic or what people think about my topic DON’T FORGET! well. Tell your reader what topics you will be covering in your essay as
Choice #1 I want to talk to you about earthquakes. Today I will write about how earthquakes happen, earthquakes that happen all over the world, and seismology. You will like this essay. You will learn a lot.
Choice #2 Hi hello my name is Miss Caldwell I like earthquakes and!!!!!!! They are cool. Buckle your seatbelts I have a treat for yo u YOU WILL LEARN TODAY about earthquakes, how they happen, where they ahappen and a little thing called seimology!!!! Let’s start
Choice #3 Are you prepared for an earthquake? You should be! A lot of people aren’t prepared, and I want to change that. Today, I will teach you about how earthquakes happen, where they might show up, and the science behind it called “seismology”. Read more to understand earthquakes!
Choice #4 Everyone needs to be prepared for an earthquake. Earthquakes can happen any where and at any time! If you are not prepared, it can be scary. Today, I will teach you about how earthquakes happen, where they might show up, and the science behind it called “seismology”. Read more to understand earthquakes!
Choice #5 Washington’s State last major earthquake was on Feb. 8 th, 2001. It caused a lot of panic and damage to our state! Today, people still don’t know a lot about earthquakes. Today, I will teach you about how earthquakes happen, where they might show up, and the science behind it called “seismology”. Read more to understand earthquakes!
Choice #6 Earthquakes are cool. They happen all the time. Sometimes they are scary. I will tell you about earthquakes.
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