Weeds and Roses Technology EssayFunction Weed 1No person
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Weeds and Roses Technology Essay--Function
Weed #1—No person st 1 or nd 2 �In academic writing, 1 st (I) and 2 nd person (you) should rarely be used �Compare these two statements: ◦ I think it will rain today. ◦ It will rain today. �Which sounds more confident? �Who wrote your paper
Weed #1—No person �Words st 1 or nd 2 to use instead of I/you: ◦ One ◦ He/she ◦ People ◦ ? ?
Weed #2—Introduce Quotes �We’ll work on this a bit more tomorrow, but keep in mind, you need to: ◦ Introduce a quote �Show authorship �Provide background information ◦ Punctuate a quote properly ◦ Explain your quote (this may become your CM)
Weed #2—Introduce Quotes Compare these two uses of quotes Technology is also good for people who have different illnesses. For example, in the article “How Technology is Changing our Lives, ” C. Ellis from Kansas says, “Because of medical technology we can look forward to celebrating our daughter’s first birthday. ” Due to their daughter’s fatal heart, medical technology becomes important for its’ life-saving ability. Many people, such as Ellis’ daughter, might not be alive without complex technological advances. people who have different illnesses. “Because of medical technology we can look forward to celebrating our daughter’s first birthday. ” Also, technology aids people in communication.
Let’s Look at This Example Again: Introduces quote: article and author of quote Technology is also good for people who have different illnesses. For example, in the article “How Technology is Changing our Lives, ” C. Ellis from Kansas says, Proper “Because of medical technology we can Punctuatio n look forward to celebrating our daughter’s first birthday. ” Due to their daughter’s fatal heart, medical technology becomes important for its’ life -saving ability. Many people, such as Ellis’ daughter, might not be alive without Explanation complex technological advances. of quote (CM)
Now You Try: �Using information given, be sure to ◦ Introduce quote by providing background authorship ◦ Punctuate correctly ◦ Explain (this part is difficult, I know—try!) �“Electronic devices are taxing our brains and hindering our social interactions. ” �Taken from: “Brain Drain”, CBS Early Show �Dr. Jennifer Aston, author �Thesis= Much of technology is disruptive for everyday life
Weed #3—Work on Introduction �Parts to an introduction ◦ Hook ◦ Back ◦ The ◦ Sign
Hook: �A catchy way to begin your paper �Usually has something to do with overall idea of paper, i. e. , technology �NO questions! �Example: ◦ In the last decade, technology has changed so rapidly that even i-Phones become outdated yearly.
Back: �Background Information: Give general information about your subject, why it is important, who the topic pertains to, etc. �Example: ◦ While not everyone owns an i-Phone, most people are familiar with today’s technological advances. From designing cars to houses to heart-valve replacements, technology affects all areas of life.
The �Thesis: subject + opinion �Example: Subject ◦ Due to its far-reaching abilities, technology advances have improved the average human’s life. Opinion
Signposting (optional) �Similar to road signs warning driver �Lets the reader and writer know what to expect �Organizational tool �Example: ◦ One’s ability to find information quickly, to communicate with friends and family and to ensure longevity of life highlight several benefits of modern-day technology.
The whole sha-bang! In the last decade, technology has changed so rapidly that even i-Phones become outdated yearly. While not everyone owns an i-Phone, most people are familiar with today’s technological advances. From designing cars to houses to heart-valve replacements, technology affects all areas of life. Due to its far -reaching abilities, technology advances have improved the average human’s life. One’s ability to find information quickly, to communicate with friends and family and to ensure longevity of life highlight several benefits of modern-day technology.
Roses! �Nice job using topic sentences (I know you HATED the Shaping Sheet, but I think it helped tremendously!) �Most of the quotes you picked supported your claim well �Most thesis statements were clear and well-written!
Reflection, Editing and Revision (RER) Circle or highlight any use of “I” or “you”; change into more formal 3 rd person 2. Rewrite two of your quotes. Be sure to introduce them, show authorship and punctuate correctly 3. Rewrite your introduction—even if it already has all the elements. Make it stronger and ensure you have all parts 1.
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