WALT begin a narrative with a clear setting
WALT begin a narrative with a clear setting and characters.
Use your plan from the last session to help you write the beginning of the story.
Word bank Spectacular Twisted Wriggled magnificent beautiful danced Emerald stunning fluttered Magnificent forest of tall trees Crimson Spread vivid stretched arched Like a crowd of vivid green umbrellas Huge canopy of treetops like a green blanket Emerald green leaves Blazing carpet of bluebells Beautiful green cloak Like fluttering emerald ribbons Huge thick limbs Stretched as far as the eye could see Swayed to the rhythm of the wind Flung their leaves up into the sky Arched in the wind Stretched like a carpet of jewels Lay like a carpet of confetti Burst from the ground Scrawny like a plucked chicken Tall and slender Like a ballet dancer Petit dainty girl legs and arms like sticks Narrow pointy face
e. g Walking swiftly through the colourful bushes and along the beautiful rivers of the world were three, wonderful and inquisitive children. The oldest child was called Harry, he led this group through the world to admire the strange animals and discover more about the world. The second oldest was sensible Sue and the youngest was little Ben. After years of exploring the world, the children had noticed that the world was unfinished. In some places there were huge gaps that were inky black and mysterious. After a long day of swimming, the three friends sat and talked about the gaps. For years they jumped into them and played around them but now they wondered when the gaps would be filled.
e. g "What do you think the gods are doing right now? " asked Little Ben. Harry and Sue both stared up at the sky. "Looks like they are doing the same as yesterday, sleeping peacefully, eating lazily and boasting. " said Harry, "Don't forget, promising each other to start work tomorrow, " said Sue with a cheeky smile on her face. They all chuckled. They knew the gods were far too contented to start working. Suddenly, Little Ben got a funny look on his face then he became really serious. "Guys, don't you think this world needs a mouse? asked Little Ben. "What is a mouse? " asked Sue and Ben. "A mouse is a small squeaky thing. It crawls, squeaks and scampers. " explained Ben.
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