Use Verbs To Describe Scenes ME writing techniques
Use Verbs To Describe Scenes 读书笔记:@少年_ME writing techniques (1) 腾讯科技频道
Content 1 Learn to read 1 2 Learn to imitate 2 3 Learn to use 3
1 Accumulate materials This still leaves plenty of work for me, carrying the firewood in to stack in the backyard, waking early each morning to light the stove , looking after it through the day, staring at the fire each evening thinking of matters great and small. Many evenings I fall asleep while staring at the fire, exhausted by my labors(劳动). -----a paragraph from English Weekly
2 Analyze the material This still leaves plenty This plenty of of workfor forme, ------ topic carrying the firewood in to stack in the carrying A serieswaking of verbs backyard, early each morning to light waking n Describe Supporting after the stove , looking it throughscene the day, n. Describe the specific activities looking details staring at the fire each evening thinking of of astaring day n. Convey thesmall. certain matters great and Many feeling evenings I fall exhaustedby by asleep while staring at the fire, exhausted Fall asleep my mylabors(劳动). labors exhausted------ conclusion -----a paragraph from English Weekly
2 Learn to imitate
1 Sentences’ writing n. Collect the verbs l. Get up early l. Finish the breakfast quickly He got up early and finished the breakfast quickly in the clear morning. n. Add the exact purpose/time/places. . etc l. In the early morning
1 Sentences’ writing n. Collect the verbs Activities in class: l. Take notes carefully l. Listen to the teacher seriously l“study” is not proper, for it is took notes carefully too. He general! when attending class. n. Add the exact purpose/time/places. . etc l. In the class lwhen taking/attending class
1 Sentences’ writing n. Collect the verbs n. Add the exact purpose/time/places. . etc l. Have lunch l. Dine l. Eat meals l. Have food He ate meals in the canteen with friends. l. In the canteen l. With classmates/friends l……
1 Sentences’ writing n. Collect the verbs n. Add the exact purpose/time/places. . etc l. Do one’s homework l. Finish one’s homework l. Be absorbed in doing l…… Every evening, he did his homework carefully. l. Every evening/in the class l. To realize one’s dream
2 Be sure of the topic & feeling/conclusion These pictures describe a common school day. l. Topic : _________________ This still leaves plenty of work for me, This is also a common school day, lfeelings: _________________ exhausted excited frightened satisfied amazed delighted grieved(sad) ……
3 Integrate sentences into one paragraph Topic This still leaves plenty of work for me, This is also common school day in forthe him, carrying thea firewood in to stack u. Make use of the getting up waking early in early the early backyard, eachmorning, morningtaking to light verbs Aor series of Vexpressions notes carefully in the class doing homework the stove , looking after it , through the day, ing flexible. through thethe whole evening. Many evenings staring at fire each evening thinking ofhe falls asleep matters great, satisfied! and small. Many evenings I fall u. Add details to your passage asleep while staring at the fire, exhausted by make Feeling/conclusion my labors(劳动). logically -----a paragraph on your own -----a paragraph from English Weekly
3 Learn to use Watch the video & collect the words
“This is also a common 1 Outline your passage school day for Time/ collect verbs Topic him, ” feeling Place/purpose visit the sweep the l上坟 tombs graves light the l上香 incense go outside l踏青 and walk enjoy the l享受春天 spring to ofremember one’s visit the l上坟 the family relatives graves members to show l扫墓 who passed respect away “This still leaves plenty of work for me, ” on the l踏青 green to enjoy the l享受春天 blossoming spring This is also a traditional festival for Chinese people, l sad l sorrowful l grieved Although/ however l delighted
2 Integrate your passage n. How do people celebrate their Qing Ming holiday? This is also a traditional festival for Chinese people, visiting the graves of their relatives, u. Make the lighting incenses to remember the family output of feeling members who passed away, or going outside consistent with and walking on the green to enjoy the blossoming spring. Although this festival the description of has its lighter side, it's mostly a sorrowful verbs. -----a paragraph on your own time.
1 pictures for writing
passages for appreciating It was a night that promised nothing good for him, braving the gale-force wind, standing rooted to the deep snow, keeping prowling the streets up and down, looking for a shop named Military Curios. He shook his head and tried to clear his trembling mind. ﹡prowl: move around quietly -----a paragraph by Z
2 pictures for writing
Works for appreciating There are still plentiful things we’re going to do, getting up early in every blossoming spring morning, walking along the river after dinner in the hot, summer sunshine, climbing up high when the autumn leaves fall, preparing meals under a blanket of snow all winter. It’s like in every moment, the whole universe existed just to bring us together. -----a paragraph by Z The strong feeling of love hides between the lines!
Draw a conclusion imitate use Writing practice
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