THINGS ABOUT WRITING 1sentence structure 2paper structure head

THINGS ABOUT WRITING : 1、sentence structure 2、paper structure: head, body, conclusion 3、model Essay

1、sentence structure

（2）一个妆真的可以改变一个人 那些把一个人拥有财产的数量当做评判其社会地 位的唯一标准的人们，会很重视追逐奢侈品的生 活方式。 Many people who consider A as B take seriously the lifestyle of pursuing luxuries. A: the number of one’s bling goods B: an only standard to judge his/her social position

（2）一个妆真的可以改变一个人 那些把一个人拥有财产的数量当做评判其社会地 位的唯一标准的人们，会很重视追逐奢侈品的生 活方式。 Many people who consider the quantity of one’s belongings as a unique criterion to judge one’s social rank, thus, may take seriously the lifestyle of “chasing after” luxuries. (metaphor)

2. (n. )/ 句子结尾 + V-ed、en(被动) / V-ing(主动) Case 1: youngsters, ranging from / who range from 20 to 30 -year olds

Case 2: 研究发现，和十年前的5%相比，现在有 近 24%的年轻白领表示不清楚自己想要什么。 A recent finding has provided the first concrete clue that 24 percent more or less of young white collars，ranging from 25 to 30 -year olds, are barely sure of what to keep and what to get rid of, compared with those of 5 percent one decade ago.

3．（n. ）+ with + (n. ) a pretty girl → a girl with an angel-like face and a fairy-like figure Case: 当今，很多有钱人喜欢通过买豪车来显示 自己的成功和存在。 素颜版：Nowadays, a lot of riches like buying luxurious autos to show their existence.

变妆版：These days, an overwhelming number of people, with money bulging out of their pockets, are switching their expenditure into purchasing limousines/luxurious vehicles, (which are) defined as the typical marks of one’s attainment.

2、paper structure head, body, conclusion

→what ==== background(chart / phenomenon) why ★ === main idea + analyses (reasons / effects) + cases how === conclusion (echo the main idea) / suggestions

3. Model Essays

The Fragrance Always Stays In The Hand That Gives The Rose

When a man is in difficulty, as illustrated in the picture above, he can look for help from those people he helped in the past. This reminds us of the importance of a healthy concept of giving and taking.

Begin with giving. When people see that you help others in need, they may be inspired to help as well; that is to say, you are setting a good example for others. For example, when a child sees his father buying groceries for an elderly person, it’s very likely that he/she will imitate this behavior and learn to look for ways to be helpful as well.

As for taking, when you are generous in helping others, you will receive the assistance you need in one way or another. But we shouldn’t “give” only so we can later “take. ” When we work for the good of others—even if we receive no personal reward later—we fill the world with hope and make the world a better place to live.

On the whole, the world will be more wonderful when everyone is willing to help others.

举一反三 drawing inferences about other cases from one instance

It’s the most interesting cartoon I’ve ever met in the latest 10 -year real exam papers. If the man in the right scissors the rope, both the victim in the left and himself/herself will lose the chance to survive. Actually, to hurt someone is good to none but worse to yourself, as a Chinese classic saying goes.

These days, we’ve seen a lot of moral disasters via social networks. The underlying reason for our mankind to hurt each other is that we are used to let our own ego out. In the background of the “fast and furious” economic development, every specific person can feel under unspeakable pressure due to the limited occupations and personal options.

Normally, the way to fit the fierce situation is to change yourself. However, few people are willing to get out of the way of themselves. Rather, they have indulged themselves in egoistic impulse, which may lead them to sacrifice other’s benefits.

For example, it’s very irrational to sacrifice social justice in the name of efficiency because the terminal of happiness is equal care towards everyone rather than the richness of minority. When efficiency kills justice, he himself will die soon.

For the sake of yourself, please cherish every little drip of other’s kindness and discard the Devil inside.

Lack of Trust and Honesty Current society is discussing the problem of lack of trust and honesty. Citizens are surrounded by false products and lies as they go through their normal days. When we meet a supposedly disabled man begging for money in the street, we immediately wonder if he is cheating us.

Consumers cannot easily believe anything merchants have guaranteed in the business world. This situation needs to be addressed through the action of government and society.

The underlying reason for this phenomenon is that busy schedules in life and work leave people with little time to really investigate things in the outside world; consequently people cannot trust those they do not know. Trust is not something that can be built with quick-fix techniques. Rather, it is something that is cultivated through personal interactions.

Another factor at play is that there are not enough consequences to deter immoral people from lying and cheating to benefit themselves. The government has not enacted laws strict enough, and must enforce all the relevant laws.

In view of all these factors, certain measures must be taken to improve this situation. Government should enact laws to punish fraud, and the public should enhance their communication with others and build up their trust. Only through these methods can we return to a more moral environment.

FINAL WORDS

Your story may not have a such happy beginning, but that doesn‘t make who you are. It is the rest of your story, who you choose to be. 你人生故事的开头也许充满坎坷，但这并不影 响你成为什么样的人。关键看后来的人生路， 你选择怎么走下去。------《功夫熊猫 2》