The Literary Essay Bend One Gallery Walk and

The Literary Essay Bend One Gallery Walk and Publishing 2018

Ø Copy homework in agenda: Ø Make final changes to your essay by tomorrow ØYou will need: ØPencil Today is Monday, December 17. It is a Day 6 A. ØQuick Reminder: ØIf you earned a 100% on Friday’s spelling quiz, please see me for a star. ØC Block once again earned the highest average!

I can… Learning Targets …refer to the rubric in order to provide constructive feedback to my peers. …use peer feedback in order to make effective revisions to my essay.

Connectio n Last week, we reviewed all of the important steps we have taken to reach a completed literary essay. Today, we will be reading each other’s essays, referring to the rubric, and offering our peers constructive feedback on their writing. Turn and Talk: What does constructive feedback look like?

THE RUBRIC 1. Fill out the heading. 2. Place the rubric on your desk but do not write on it. 3. You will be referring to the rubric during the Gallery Walk.

Billy Smith. The Gallery Walk 1. Fill out the heading and place the form on your desk next to the rubric and your computer. 2. Rotate to the first essay. 3. Write your name under Reader’s Name. 4. Carefully read the essay. 5. Look at each part of the rubric and consider what the student has done well and how they can improve. Do not write on the rubric. Only write on the Gallery Walk form. 6. Carefully and neatly complete each column, using bullet points. Be very specific. 7. Rotate and repeat. E X A M P L E Francine Williams. ~used the storytelling technique to convey evidence ~organized essay into 5 paragraphs ~used correct conventions ~ explain the evidence in more detail ~use a variety of transitions instead of repeating the same ones ~add a topic sentence to BP#3

Ø Return to your seat and review the feedback provided by your peers. Ø How will you use this feedback to improve the quality of your essay? REVIEW THE FEEDBACK Ø HOMEWORK: Ø Make final revisions to your essay and come to class on Tuesday ready to turn it in. Ø Remember to refer to the rubric while making these changes. Ø Bring your rubric to class tomorrow.

ØHomework ØFinish your essay if it’s not yet done. Today is Tuesday, December 18. It is a Day 1 B. ØToday, you will need: ØRubric ØGallery Walk Form ØComputer

I can… Learning Targets …use peer feedback in order to make final revisions to my essay. …turn in my completed essay.

1. Read your essay one more time and make any final revisions. 2. Copy and paste your essay and save it to your documents or to One Drive. 3. Go back into the Literary Essay Bend One Assignment on Teams. Press Close and then Turn in. 4. Staple the Rubric to the Gallery Walk form and hand them in on Mrs. Premus’s desk. 5. Use the remainder of class time to work