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An Introduction Definition and Purpose An introduction is the first paragraph in your essay

An Introduction Definition and Purpose An introduction is the first paragraph in your essay and contains thesis statement. The main purposes of an introduction is to… q present the focus of your essay and give your reader some general information about your subject. q catch your reader’s attention so that he/she will become interested in reading your essay.

An Introduction General Information and Focus An introduction always includes some general statements about

An Introduction General Information and Focus An introduction always includes some general statements about your subject and a thesis statement that announces the focus of your essay. The thesis statement is usually the last sentence in the introduction because it is the most specific. Notice how the introduction below begins with general information and becomes more specific.

An Introduction General Information and Focus General statements provide background information on the focus

An Introduction General Information and Focus General statements provide background information on the focus of health care for homeless people with HIV. There a number of frightening disease epidemics occurring in the United States today, but one of the most frightening is the epidemic spread of sexually transmitted diseases. Among the most serious of these sexually transmitted diseases is HIV which leads to AIDS, a fatal disease. HIV is especially problematic among homeless people. This particular population is difficult to treat due to a number of barriers such as, limited access to health care, mistrust of health care professionals, and a lack of awareness of the disease, itself. Specific focus of essay and thesis statement.

An Introduction A Closer Look Let’s look at that introduction again and see how

An Introduction A Closer Look Let’s look at that introduction again and see how the sentences become more and more specific leading to thesis statement. There a number of frightening disease epidemics occurring in the United States today, but one of the most frightening is the epidemic spread of sexually transmitted diseases. General Statements Among the most serious of these sexually transmitted diseases is HIV which leads to AIDS, a fatal disease. HIV is especially problematic among homeless people. Very Specific: Thesis Statement This particular population is difficult to treat due to a number of barriers such as, limited access to health care, mistrust of health care professionals, and a lack of awareness of the disease, itself. More Specific

Example #2 General Information and Focus Here is another example of how an introduction

Example #2 General Information and Focus Here is another example of how an introduction can begin with general information and become more specific with a thesis statement at the end.

Example #2 General Information and Focus General statements provide background information on the steps

Example #2 General Information and Focus General statements provide background information on the steps the Indian government is taking to reduce population. Overpopulation and finding ways to reduce it are big concerns of many developing nations today. One nation that is concerned about this issue is India. One of the biggest causes of overpopulation in India is the high infant mortality rate. Parents often have more children because they are fearful that if some children die, there won’t be enough children to take care of them in their old age. India is taking some important steps in dealing with this problem. Some of the steps the Indian government is taking are providing birth control for women, improving pre-natal care, and educating women on the benefits of having fewer children. Specific focus of essay and thesis statement.

Example #2 A Closer Look at the example below to see how the sentences

Example #2 A Closer Look at the example below to see how the sentences in the introduction become more and more specific leading to thesis statement. General Statements Overpopulation and finding ways to reduce it are big concerns of many developing nations today. One nation that is concerned about this issue is India. One of the biggest causes of overpopulation in India is the high infant mortality rate. More Parents often have more children because they are fearful that if some children die, there won’t be enough children to take care of them in their old age. Very Specific: Thesis Statement India is taking some important steps in dealing with this problem. Some of the steps the Indian government is taking are providing birth control for women, improving pre-natal care, and educating women on the benefits of having fewer children. Specific

What would you change in the following intro, to help the writer out? If

What would you change in the following intro, to help the writer out? If I could bring anything for show and tell I would bring my skateboard. My skateboard means a lot to me after all I paid more for it then I did my car. I have many reasons why I would bring my skateboard I’ll just share a few. My skateboard doesn't exactly match but its very unique. I'll start off by the colors and brands then why its important to me and last just why I love it so much.

An Introduction Catch the Reader’s Attention In addition to stating thesis and providing some

An Introduction Catch the Reader’s Attention In addition to stating thesis and providing some general information on your subject, an introduction also needs to catch a reader’s attention and cause him/her to become interested in reading your essay. There are several ways you can introduce your subject and catch your reader’s attention. q q q Use a story or example of a personal experience. Use a quotation. Use a Fact/Curiosity Use a question or questions. Use a Definition

Catching Attention Using a Story or Personal Experience A brief dramatic story or example

Catching Attention Using a Story or Personal Experience A brief dramatic story or example can be used to get the attention of your reader. Look at the example below and think about how it catches your attention.

Personal Story or Example A personal story can “hook” your reader into wanting to

Personal Story or Example A personal story can “hook” your reader into wanting to read more. When the car accident happened, my brother was left with a broken arm, leg, and hip. My mother nearly died due to head injuries. However, we all survived due to the team of emergency medical technicians who responded quickly to the scene and provided us with the help we needed. After my experience of being involved in a car accident, I saw how I could use my interest in first aid and desire to help other people through becoming an emergency medical technician. Now, after twenty years of work as an EMT, I think it is the most rewarding job I could ever have and feel that the occupation, itself, has numerous advantages over other occupations in the health care field. Thesis Statement

Personal Story or Example #2 Here’s another example of how you can use a

Personal Story or Example #2 Here’s another example of how you can use a story to catch a reader’s attention in an introduction.

Personal Story or Example #2 An example of a story in the third person.

Personal Story or Example #2 An example of a story in the third person. John’s parents divorced when he was in elementary school. After the divorce, his mother had to go to work to support him and his three sisters. This disrupted John’s home life in serious ways. Without the constant supervision of his mother and the lack of a father for a role-model, John began skipping school and socializing with the wrong group of people. He eventually turned to taking drugs and was later arrested for being a drug dealer and sent to prison. John is not unlike other prisoners. In many prisons today, over half of all inmates come from divorced families. Divorce can be the catalyst that unleashes emotional problems in children and can affect children psychologically, mentally, and socially. Thesis Statement

Catching Attention Using a Quote Sometimes controversial or well-known quotations can be used to

Catching Attention Using a Quote Sometimes controversial or well-known quotations can be used to surprise your reader. Look at the example below and notice how a quotation can be used to get you interested in the rest of the essay.

Using a Quote A well-known quotation from American literature. Henry David Thoreau, an American

Using a Quote A well-known quotation from American literature. Henry David Thoreau, an American poet, once wrote, “ Our life is frittered away by detail… simplify, simplify!” These words of advice are difficult to follow in a society where a hectic pace of life is the norm and the attainment of more material goods is encouraged. However, I believe that this philosophy of living simply has quite a bit of merit. The difficulty of following this philosophy is knowing where we should begin. If we examine Henry David Thoreau’s life carefully, I believe we will find a number of ways in which to simplify our own lives and yet live richly. (Quotation from: Watson, 1951) Thesis Statement

Quotation Example #2 Here’s another example of how you can use a quotation to

Quotation Example #2 Here’s another example of how you can use a quotation to catch a reader’s attention in an introduction.

Quotation Example #2 Quotation Horace once wrote, “ Many blessings do the advancing years

Quotation Example #2 Quotation Horace once wrote, “ Many blessings do the advancing years bring with them. ” For many senior citizens in the United States today, old age can often come as a curse. Many older people suffer from ill health, loneliness, and/or financial instability; however, life in later years does not have to be this way. Many senior citizens can experience the blessings of advancing years that Horace once wrote about. In order to do that, let’s consider ways in which old age actually enhances life. (Quotation from: Watson, 1951) Thesis Statement

Practice Using this quote, create a hook for your practice intro about doing your

Practice Using this quote, create a hook for your practice intro about doing your work in class. You can use it all or a part. “Your talent determines what you can do. Your motivation determines how much you are willing to do. Your attitude determines how well you do it. ” – Lou Holtz n

Using A Fact or Something Interesting n Curiosity: if you find something odd, it

Using A Fact or Something Interesting n Curiosity: if you find something odd, it can be used to gain attention, because hopefully, what you find interesting others will

Example #1 A seemingly random fact to draw interest of the reader The pentagon

Example #1 A seemingly random fact to draw interest of the reader The pentagon has twice as many bathrooms as are necessary. The famous government building was constructed in the 1940 s, when segregation laws required that separate bathrooms be installed for people of African descent. This building isn’t the only American icon that harkens back to this embarrassing and hurtful time in our history. Across the United States there are many examples of leftover laws and customs that reflect the racism that once permeated American society. Thesis Statement

Catching Attention Using Questions Another way to catch your reader’s attention is with a

Catching Attention Using Questions Another way to catch your reader’s attention is with a question. Questions can make your reader begin thinking about the subject in your essay.

Using Questions that may surprise your reader. Have you ever run in a marathon?

Using Questions that may surprise your reader. Have you ever run in a marathon? Most marathons are twenty six miles. Have you ever heard of one-hundred mile marathons? The state of Colorado hosts a one-hundred mile marathon each year. People from all over the United States and the world run in this marathon. Some of the top runners in this race have been members of the Tarahumara Indian tribe in the Sierra Madre mountains of Mexico. Tarahumaras do not train for marathons, but their lifestyle and culture promotes, develops, and supports this type of athletic endeavor. Thesis Statement

Questions Example #2 Here’s another example of how you can use a question to

Questions Example #2 Here’s another example of how you can use a question to catch a reader’s attention in an introduction. Question Did you know that one of the eight architectural wonders of the world is located in Cambodia? Angkor Wat is an ancient Buddhist temple that was the center of culture and religion for the Khmer empire for several centuries. It was only recently re-discovered by a French explorer during the 1800’s. It has now become one of the most popular tourist attractions in Southeast Asia. If you visit Angkor Wat, you will find much to admire in its size, historical significance, and beauty. Thesis Statement

Grabbing Attention n Using a Definition: A definition that you will be using as

Grabbing Attention n Using a Definition: A definition that you will be using as the topic of your paper, may be a nice way to introduce the topic so that people can understand what your paper is about

Example A Definition that leads into thesis of the paper A homograph is a

Example A Definition that leads into thesis of the paper A homograph is a word with two or more pronunciations. Produce is one example. These words can be confusing for any person learning to speak English. This leads English to be one of the hardest languages to learn because it has many homographs, a combination of multiple languages, and has spellings that are not phonetic. Thesis Statement

Homework: Create an introduction paragraph on the following prompt: As part of the “war

Homework: Create an introduction paragraph on the following prompt: As part of the “war on drugs” and in reaction to an increase in school violence, many schools across the nation now conduct targeted searches of student lockers and backpacks. Although the Supreme Court has ruled that public school officials have the right to search students’ persons and property when they have reasonable cause to suspect weapons or drugs, many people feel this is a gross violation of students’ right to privacy. Others feel that since school officials are responsible for the well-being of students while they are in the building, they have the right to search for drugs or weapons at any time. How do you feel about this issue? State your position and explain your reasons with specific examples.