Student 4 Carl Post Feedback Tasks 30 mins

Student 4 Carl Post- Feedback Tasks: 30 mins Richard Galletly, Aston University

Student needs Effective conclusions In text referencing End of text referencing Logical division Formal language (‘to talk about’ is too informal) The practice… / to practise …

Introduction/ conclusion Introductory paragraphs: Oshima, 2006 p 57 -63 Conclusion paragraphs: Oshima, 2006 p 72 - 77

In text referencing Quotations: Oshima, 2006 p 42 - 49 The great big referencing quiz: Tissington, 2009 p 71 -

Logical division What logical division is and why it is important: Fitzpatrick, 2011 p 49 -59 Logical division: Oshima, 2006 p 64 -71

Formal language used in academic writing Formal language: Swales, 2007 p 18 Academic style: Bailey, 2011 p 147 -153

References I Bailey, S. (2011). Academic Writing for International Students of Business. Oxon: Routledge. Bowell, T. & Kemp, G. (2010). Critical Thinking: a Concise Guide. Oxon: Routledge. Burke, D. & Pieterick, J. (2010). Giving Students Effective Written Feedback. Maidenhead: Mc. Graw-Hill Education. Cottrell, S. (2005). Critical Thinking Skills. Basingstoke: Palgrave Macmillan. Fitzpatrick, M. (2011). Engaging Writing 2: Essential Skills for Academic Writing. NY: Pearson Education. Gillett, A. , Hammond, A. & Martala, M. (2009). Successful Academic Writing. Harlow: Pearson Education Ltd.

References II Hewings, M. (2005). Advanced Grammar in Use. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press. Mc. Millan, K. & Weyers, J. (2010). How to write essays and assignments. Harlow: Pearson Education Ltd. Murphy, R. (2004). English Grammar in Use. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press. Oshima, A. & Hogue, A. (2006). Writing Academic English: level 4. NY: Pearson Education. Reinders, H. , Moore, N. & Lewis, M. (2008). The International Student Handbook. London: Palgrave Macmillan. Swales, J. M. & Feak, C. B. (2007). Academic Writing for Graduate Students. Michigan: The University of Michigan Press.

References III Swan, M. (2005). Practical English Usage. Oxford: Oxford University Press. Tissington, P. , Hasel, M. & Matthiesen, J. (2009). How to Write Successful Business and Management Essays. London: Sage Publications Ltd.