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Step Up to Writing a paragraph!
Two Common Kinds of Writing • Narrative – Tells a story – Has a beginning, middle, and an end – Has characters, setting, and a plot • Expository – Gives information – Has an introduction, a body, and a conclusion – Has reasons, transitions, and examples
When I step up to writing, I say when to GO!! SLOW DOWN!! STOP!!! GO BACK!!! And, when to Take notes and follow the steps on learning how to write a good paragraph
Write a topic sentence. The topic sentence introduces your topic and represents the main idea of the paragraph.
Topic Sentence Green means “go. ” Green asks the writer to decide: “What am I going to prove? ” “What am I going to explain? ” “What information will I share? ”
Give a reason, detail, or fact. Yellow represents your details that support the main idea. In a typical paragraph, you need 3 clear details.
Explain. Give an example. After each yellow detail, you need to STOP and give an example or explain the detail. These are called supporting details. Each detail may have 1 -2 STOPS to provide supporting details.
The E’s • The E’s – – – Examples Explanations Evidence Events Experiences – – Expert opinion Everyday life Effective illustrations Elaboration • Always ask yourself if you have enough red. • Check to see if you have included specific examples or presented enough evidence
Remind the reader of your topic. This is called your concluding sentence. This is the last sentence of the paragraph that sums up the topic.
Conclusion Green means “go back to your topic. ” Restate the topic and the position. Do not introduce new information. Use synonyms and leave your reader with something to remember.
OK, let’s get started!!!
After you decide a topic, come up with a catchy topic sentence. My Topic: Swimming
Swimming is a good way to beat the heat.
Next, give a reason, detail, or fact (D 1) to support your topic sentence.
Swimming is a good way to beat the heat. Swimming laps
Then, give 1 explanation for each reason, detail, or fact.
Swimming is a good way to beat the heat. Swimming laps Good exercise and improves swimming skills
Now, give ANOTHER reason, detail, or fact (D 2) to support your topic sentence.
Swimming is a good way to beat the heat. Swimming laps Play fun games Good exercise/improves swimming skills
Next, give 1 MORE explanations (Es) for your NEW reason, detail, or fact.
Swimming is a good way to beat the heat. Swimming laps Good exercise/improves swimming skills Play fun games Diving, jumping, beach ball, Marco Polo
Now, give ANOTHER reason, detail, or fact (D 3) to support your topic sentence.
Swimming is a good way to beat the heat. Swimming laps Good exercise/improves swimming skills Play Fun Games Diving, jumping, beach ball, Marco Polo Keep cool
Next, give 1 MORE explanations (Es) for your NEW reason, detail, or fact.
Swimming is a good way to beat the heat. Swimming laps Good exercise/improves swimming skills Play Fun Games Diving, jumping, beach ball, Marco Polo Keep cool Water keeps body cool on hot days
Finally, remind the reader of your topic. Use new words to restate your topic sentence.
Swimming is a good way to beat the heat. Swimming laps Good exercise/improves swimming skills Play Fun Games Diving, jumping, beach ball, Marco Polo Keep cool Water keeps body cool on hot days Playing in the pool is enjoyable
Some Transition Words (support yellow details) ØFirst-Another-Next ØFirst-Second-Third ØOne-Then-Another ØA good-A better-The best ØOne-Another-Finally ØOne-One other-Along with-Last
Some More Transition Words ØAs soon as-Next-Later-In the end ØTo start-Furthermore-Additionally-Last ØTo begin-At the same time-Finally ØInitially-Then-After That ØTo begin-Then consequently ØFirst-In addition-Equally important
Conclusion Words v. In conclusion v. Certainly v. Definitely v. To sum up v. Clearly vsurely
Now, let’s turn our T-Chart into a paragraph!
Going swimming is one of the best ways to beat the heat during the summer. One good thing about swimming is doing laps in the pool. . Swimming laps is great exercise and they also help you improve your swimming skills. The best thing about swimming, though, is playing around in the pool! In the pool you can do jumps and dives off of the diving board as well as play fun water games such as Marco Polo. Lastly, swimming is a good way to keep your body cool. On hot days, a dip in the pool will certainly beat the heat. Clearly, there is no better way to avoid the summer heat!
Your Turn! Group Practice 1. We will break into groups. You will need a: Recorder (writes) Reporter (speaks) Task Manager (keeps group on task) Proofreader (proofreads paragraph) Time Keeper (keeps track of time Everyone must complete T chart in the group_
Your Turn! Group Practice 1. Your group will use the topic provided to you to complete a T chart about your topic just like we did as a class. 2. Once your group has completed the T-chart, you will write your paragraph on chart paper (see Miss Pollard’s example) 3. When your group has finished writing the paragraph, be sure to give it a title, circle the transitional words, and use three markers (green, yellow, red) to underline the sentences that represent the area of the paragraph. (see Miss Pollard’s example) 4. Be prepared to present your paragraph at the end of the hour.
Your Turn! Independent Practice Now that we have practiced as a class and as a group, you will write your own paragraph. You will need: -T-Chart -Loose Leaf Sheet of Paper -Pencil/Pen -Brain Three Crayons, Markers, or highlighters (Green, red, yellow)
Your Turn! Independent Practice Choose ONE topic from the list below. Once you have chosen a topic, complete the paragraph process just as we did in class and as groups: -Explain what makes someone successful. -Explain what makes a good coach. -Explain what makes the worst paragraph topic. -Explain the perks of being in middle school Remember you will need three details and supporting details in your paragraph. 8 -10 sentences