Scholarship Application Seminar SACRED HEART MEMBERS ONLY Sacred
Scholarship Application Seminar SACRED HEART MEMBERS ONLY
Sacred Heart Education Commission Seminar Information provided must allow reader to evaluate the applicant’s financial need academic promise and community involvement Seminar Purpose – Preview scholarship application – Know how to prepare any application
PLEASE NOTE: INCOMPLETE APPLICATIONS WILL NOT BE PROCESSED DUE TO MISSING REQUIRED INFORMATION AND / OR DOCUMENTS SACRED HEART MEMBERS ONLY
CHECKLIST ONLY COMPLETE APPLICATIONS WILL BE CONSIDERED. PLEASE CHECK THAT YOU HAVE ENCLOSED DOUCUMENTATION BEFORE SUBMISSION. PLACE A CHECKMARK BY EACH ENCLOSED DOCUMENT THREE (3) Reference letters DATED and SIGNED –No More Than Two (2) Years Old A letter about your personal goals Verification of all income information (e. g. a copy of YOUR / FAMILY HOUSEHOLD W-2) Provide copies of official documentation of family financial income Proof of enrollment or acceptance at the school you will attend. Fully completed application form Transcripts Provide copy as proof __________ Sacred Heart Church Participation/ Involvement / Volunteer Helpful Information can be found in Questions & Answers (Q & A) section on the Education Commission Website
Sacred Heart Education Commission Seminar • Strategies – – – – – Read application thoroughly Follow directions Answer all questions Submit by deadline date Clean, legible Integrity Recheck/proofread Make copies of all forms for your personal records Write an essay that answers to theme
Sacred Heart Education Commission Seminar • Remember, your application should say to the evaluator – The applicant has followed instructions, the application is complete, documentation has been provided and the applicant can be supported • We will examine KEY points of the application
Personal Information Legal Name John Francis Rae email address Address (Number Street) Date of Birth Hot Mama@Yahoo. Com JFRae 4152@ aol. com 05/12/88 Telephone Number(s) 4520 West Northend Ave. Email 313 222 -5555 Addresses City or Town State Zip Code 48201 Detroit MI reflect positively / Please attach a letter about your current educational and personal goals. Include any information you believe would help us evaluate your application. negatively on YOU References (current within the last two (2) years) Please submit three (3) letters of recommendation DATED AND SIGNED with this application. The letters can be included with your application, faxed to (313) 831 -8603, or mailed to Sacred Heart Church, 1000 Eliot, Detroit, MI 48207. You should verify all three letters arrive before the application deadline.
Past Academic Information Include information about the last three years. Include earlier information if it will help us evaluate your application. Attach a list if you need more room. Address Dates Attended School Name Michigan State University 123 Main Campus Drive East Michigan 48923 09/2004 – 06/2007 Grade Point Average 3. 50 Current Academic Information Please include proof of acceptance or current enrollment at this institution, such as a copy of your student identification card or a copy of your letter of acceptance. If you are currently enrolled, send a transcript of your grades. If you are just starting at this school, send a transcript from the last school you attended. For example, if you are a college freshman, please send a high school transcript.
Name of College, University or Vocational School where you plan to use the scholarship Address (Number Street) City or Town Field of Study (Major) State Zip Code Student Status (e. g. freshman) Sacred Heart Church Community Service Contributions to your community can include extra-curricular activities or volunteer work. Sacred Heart Organizations involvement/ participation will be given the highest weight. If you need more room, please attach a list of your additional services to the community. List Dates What type of Sacred Heart Community Services activities should be listed? Sacred Heart Organization / Participation /Involvement Community Services should include your participation in Sacred Heart Church Organizations such as: Administration Commission, African American Focus Play, Altarto Servers, Arts Youth Choir 2007 present Committee, Bazaar Volunteer, Body & Spirit Dance Adult Ministry, Cancer Support Team, Choir (Youth / Adult), Christmas Program, Community Affairs, Detroit Catholic Pastoral Alliance, Economic Development Commission, Education Commission, Employment Resource Committee, Faithful Few, Friends of the Bereaved, Friends of the Sick & Shut In, Haiti Committee, Other Community Service Health Task Force, Inter Faith Golden Circle, Intonjane, Junior Daughters, Junior Knights, Knights of Peter Claver, Inc. , Ladies Auxiliary of St. Peter Claver, Men of Isuthu, Ministers of Faith, List Commission, Dates Ministers of Service, Sacred Heart Herald, Social Affairs of De. Paul, activity or organization St. Name Vincent Usher Board, Worship Commission, Youth Council, Youth Liturgical Dancers Note: Other outside community services may be listed but a higher weight will be given to your participation at Sacred Heart Church.
Immediate Family Information Please indicate the head of the household with an asterisk ‘*’. Family information here is similar to the way it is reported on a W-4. If you are financially independent, you should report only your income. If you are married, have children, or if you are a dependent child you should include income information for your household. If you need more room, please attach the information. Family Address (Number Street) Family Size City or Town State Zip Code Applicant Name Family Member Names Home Telephone Number Age Relation to applicant Age Head (s) of Household John Smith Father 40 Anna L. Smith Mother 38 Barbara Smith Sister 14 Do Not Use Nicknames
Financial Information Please furnish official substantiation for the income information provided, e. g. copies of a W-2, Social Security statement, Other Statements of Income, Financial Aid applications. Please send copies of your important documents. Applicant’s Employer’s Address (Number Street) City or Town State Zip Code Names of Other Grants, Scholarships or Loans Awarded to Applicant PELL Grant Amount $1, 000. 00 Annual Incomes in the Past Year: Combined Head of Household Income $38, 00. 00 Applicant $8, 000. 00 Income Total Household $46, 000. 00 Income
As with all official documents remember to Sign and Date Signature Today’s Date Helen J. Jones 05/20/10 Applications, including all supporting documentation, for the scholarships must be returned to Father Thomas by June 30 th. If you have any questions about how to fill out this application, please contact Frieda Thorne at (313) 863 -4687 or Bonnie Walker at (248) 543 -2698. You may email Bonnie Walker at bjwalk@msn. com.
Sacred Heart Education Commission Seminar We will examine a Good and Bad Essay
Bad Personal Statement Sample
Bad Personal Statement • My name is Zhane Fullerton. I am applying for the Scared Hart Scholarship. I need this money in order to become a industrial engine. I have been accepted to Oakland County Community College in the fall of 2007. I am 18. I need this money because I am in a household with three other siblings planning to go to college. This money will help me to pay for tuition, a new car, gas money, and room and board at the university. I believe if you give me this money I will try my hardest to prove to you that I can make it.
Bad Personal Statement • Industrial engines make lots of money and I am ready to do what I have to do in order to earn a lot of money and provide for my parents as my parents have provided for me.
Bad Personal Statement • I am struggling with being on my own. The fee for going to OCCC is thousands of dollars. I know that giving me this scholarship will help me with paying the costs of the tuition and them some. With the assistance of my parish family, my mother, and other scholarships, I will be one step closer to achieving my dream.
Good Personal Statement Sample
Good Personal Statement • People are often told that education is important. People are told that a person must strive for an education. It is a recent occurrence that people have been told that there is money out there for them. Therefore, I shall seek it. My dream is to become an industrial engineer. Industrial engineers help to shape the future of our society. It is commonly defined that industrial engineers are people that help to make society run more efficiently; they work to eliminate wastes of time, energy, money, resources, and other materials.
Good Personal Statement • Our society is bogged down with the ‘red tape’ of government, the ‘red tape’ of policies, and the old standards of doing things. For instance, the oil industry is inefficient. The use of oil from the Middle East is hurting our country. As an industrial engineer, it would be my job to find out how to develop an energy source that can replace oil, is safer than oil, and is more accessible to the country, without depending on foreign suppliers.
Good Personal Statement cont. • It is necessary that someone change the status quo to make things better and efficient for the future generations of our society. Being eighteen years old, graduating from high school and going to college I will be on the road to achieve this possible reality.
Good Personal Statement • The engineering program at Oakland County Community College is a great program that I am scheduled to be apart of in the fall of 2010. With the assistance of my parish family, my mother, and other scholarships, I will be one step closer to achieving my dream. Thank you for taking the time in reading my application. Zhane Fullerton
What not to Do • • Do not complete in pencil No stained papers Do not staple anything Do not wait until the last minute to fill out the application, IT SHOWS with omitted information and errors
• • • Plan ahead Place papers in a large envelope Have neat papers Typed or in black/blue ink When in doubt ask questions
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