Primary Longman Elect 5 B Chapter 6 Writing
Primary Longman Elect 5 B Chapter 6 Writing a diary entry using a mind map
You’re write a diary entry You cangoing use atomind map to help about an accident. you brainstorm ideas.
What happened? What were you doing when the accident happened? (How did you feel? ) - woke up late - running for a bus - fell over - unhappy Who helped you? How? (How did you -feel? ) a kind lady - took me to the doctor - called my mother Comments about the day terrible An accident What was the weather like? raining What happened in the end? (How did you feel? ) - mum came and took me home - we thanked the lady Change Think Now give ofyour questions answers ideas to in you these can mind ask about questions. map into thesentences. accident.
What happened? What were you doing when the accident happened? (How did you feel? ) - woke up late - running for a bus - fell over - unhappy An accident I woke up late. I was running for a bus fell over. was unhappy. bus. when I fell. Iover. I was. Iunhappy. Link the ideas together using words like when.
I woke up late. I was running for a bus when I fell over. I was unhappy. A kind lady helped me. She took me to the doctor and Shecalledmy mymother. An accident Link the ideas together using words like and. Who helped you? How? (How did you feel? ) - a kind lady - took me to the doctor - called my mother
I woke up late. I was running for a bus when I fell over. I was unhappy. A kind lady helped me. She took me to the doctor and called my mother. Mum came and took me home. We thanked the lady. It was raining. I had a terrible day today. Comments about the day terrible An accident What was the weather like? raining What happened in the end? (How did you feel? ) - mum came and took me home - we thanked the lady
I woke up late. I was running for a bus when I fell over. I was unhappy. A kind lady helped me. She took me to the doctor and called my mother. Mum came and took me home. We thanked the lady. It was raining. I had a terrible day today. You can Now putstart the sentences with a comment in order so thatthe about your day. writing makes sense.
15 th June and it I had a terrible day today. I woke up late. It was raining. I was running for a ^ I hurt my knee badly. bus when I fell over. I was unhappy. A kind lady helped me. She took me to ^ The lady was so nice and we the doctor and called my mother. Mum came and took me home. We thanked her ^ the lady. Give more Write Improve the your information date. writing Writeby about orusing draw the weather linking accident words by adding too. like and. extra details.
15 th June I had a terrible day today. I woke up late and it was raining. I was running very Luckily a for a bus when I fell over. I hurt my knee badly. I was unhappy. A kind lady ^ ^ helped me. She took me to the doctor and called my mother. Mum came and took me home. The lady was so nice and we thanked her. Add adjectives and adverbs to make your writing more interesting.
15 th June I had a terrible day today. I woke up late and it was raining. I was running for a bus when I fell over. I hurt my knee badly. I was very unhappy. Luckily a kind lady helped me. She took me to the doctor and called my mother. Mum came and took me home. The lady was so nice and we thanked her.
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