Primary Longman Elect 4 B Chapter 6 Using

Primary Longman Elect 4 B Chapter 6 Using a story map to plan a story

First, change the prince into You’re going to rewrite another character, for the story of a‘Rapunzel’. example, hunter or a soldier. hunter soldier

You’ve the hunter. Do you chosen still remember the Let’s rewrite the beginning of Now you need to change three sections of a story: You can use a story map to the story now. events in the story. beginning, middle and ending? help you plan the new story.

Prince Rapunzel and the Hunter Beginning Setting (time and place) and characters Setting: once upon a time, in a tall tower Characters: Rapunzel and the prince hunter Remember to change the prince into the hunter.

Rapunzel and the Hunter Middle Events • a prince hunter wanted to to rescue Rapunzel • Rapunzel asked about his habits week) (brush teeth 12 // week) • Rapunzel gave advice (brush teeth 2 / day) • the prince hunter came back the next week • Rapunzel asked about his habits again (wash hair feet 31 // month) • Rapunzel gave advice again feet 31 // week) day) (wash hair brush teeth 2 / week brush teeth 2 / day wash feet 1 / month wash feet 1 / day Now change Look What at advice the hunter. the did information events Rapunzel Think in the of give in two middle problems him? the story of with map. the story. his habits.

Rapunzel and the Hunter Ending • the hunter climbed out of the window and never came back again Think about the ending. What did the hunter do in the end?

Rapunzel and the Hunter Beginning Setting (time and place) and characters Setting: once upon a time, in a tall tower Characters: Rapunzel and the hunter Once upon a time a witch put a beautiful girl in a tall tower. Her name was Rapunzel. One day Rapunzel saw a hunter and shook her long hair out of the window. The hunter climbed up her hair. Use the Now change simple your past notes tense in the to story your write map into story. sentences.

Rapunzel and the Hunter Middle Events • a hunter wanted to rescue Rapunzel • Rapunzel asked about his habits (brush teeth 2 / week) • Rapunzel gave advice (brush teeth 2 / day) • the hunter came back the next week • Rapunzel asked about his habits again (wash feet 1 / month) • Rapunzel gave advice again (wash feet 1 / day) ‘I’m here to rescue you, ’ smiled the hunter. ‘Oh! Your teeth are bad and dirty. How often do you brush your teeth? ’ asked Rapunzel. The hunter was surprised. ‘Twice a week, ’ he replied. ‘You ought to brush your teeth twice a day. Come back when your teeth are clean, ’ said Rapunzel. Add dialogue to make the story more interesting.

Rapunzel and the Hunter Middle Events • the hunter came back the next week • Rapunzel asked about his habits again (wash feet 1 / month) • Rapunzel gave advice again (wash feet 1 / day) The next week the hunter climbed up Rapunzel’s hair again. He walked towards Rapunzel. ‘Ugh! Your feet smell awful. How often do you wash your feet? ’ asked Rapunzel. ‘Once a month, ’ said the hunter. ‘You ought to wash your feet once a day …’ started Rapunzel.

Rapunzel and the Hunter Ending • the hunter climbed out of the window and never came back again The hunter ran to the window. ‘You’re too bossy! I don’t want to rescue you anymore!’ he said. He climbed out of the window and never came back again. Add extra dialogue to make your ending more interesting.

Great! Now you can write the new story. Put the sentences into paragraphs.

Rapunzel and the Hunter Once upon a time a witch put a beautiful girl in a tall tower. Her name was Rapunzel. One day Rapunzel saw a hunter and shook her long hair out of the window. The hunter climbed up her hair. ‘I’m here to rescue you, ’ smiled the hunter. ‘Oh! Your teeth are bad and dirty. How often do you brush your teeth? ’ asked Rapunzel. The hunter was surprised. ‘Twice a week, ’ he replied. ‘You ought to brush your teeth twice a day. Come back when your teeth are clean, ’ said Rapunzel. ‘OK. I’m going to brush my teeth twice a day. Then my teeth will be nice and clean in a week’s time, ’ said the hunter. The next week the hunter climbed up Rapunzel’s hair again. He walked towards Rapunzel. ‘Ugh! Your feet smell awful. How often do you wash your feet? ’ asked Rapunzel. ‘Once a month, ’ said the hunter. ‘You ought to wash your feet once a day …’ started Rapunzel. The hunter ran to the window. ‘You’re too bossy! I don’t want to rescue you anymore!’ he said. He climbed out of the window and never came back again. You can add details to make your story clearer.

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