PERSONAL DECLARATION OF INDEPENDENCE Thomas Jeffersons Declaration of

PERSONAL DECLARATION OF INDEPENDENCE Thomas Jefferson’s Declaration of Independence was perhaps the most famous breakup letter of all time. Not only did Jefferson clearly outline a much needed break, but he also was eloquent in stating his specific reasons that King George was not being a loyal leader. If the job of the government is to protect the people’s safety and happiness, King George’s actions were in direct contrast to this idea…

Make it Personal… In the same way, think of something in your everyday life that is in direct contrast to maintaining your safety and happiness. This doesn’t mean a person like King George. Instead, think of a habit, routine, or personal characteristic of yours that you feel lessens your ability to reach your fullest potential. What if you could declare yourself independent of this challenge and overcome the hold it has on you?

Ideas to consider…. o o o o Procrastination Laziness Lack of motivation Tendency to gossip Negative attitude Blaming others While these are general ideas, you may address a more serious issue if you wish.

How to structure: • Introduction (5 pts) The concept or idea you wish to declare an independence from. • Body Paragraph 1 (5 pts) What you have tried in the past to correct this problem or habit that hasn’t worked. (Give examples, provide evidence, elaborate) • Body Paragraph 2 (5 pts) What are your grievances against this habit? How is it hurting your potential or your happiness? List at least three examples. • Body Paragraph 3 (5 pts) Make a plan of action for becoming independent of this concept. Basically, how are you going to change? What steps will you take? Conclusion (5 pts) How will this independence benefit you in your life? • • Fully developed paragraphs must have 8 -10 sentences to include a topic sentence at the beginning of each paragraph (10 pts) Total points for this essay = 35 points.