People learn English to use it Some learn

英语写作问题 例如： People learn English to use it. Some learn it to study or work abroad. Others learn it to read books and magazines in English or have something to do with English-speaking foreigners. 采用适当关联词，可改进为：People learn English for practical purposes：some learn it to study or work abroad，while others learn it to read or communicate in English.

段落主题句 • 段落主题句要清楚、明确 Computer is very important The computer plays an educational role in our daily life. Big cities have traffic problems Traffic problems in big cities are serious, which can be found in several ways.

发展句的衔接和过渡 连接词连接: 表示举例: for example, for instance, as a case in point, in the case of, as an illustration, such as, like, that is, say, as , take …as an example

连接词连接: 表 示 比 较 ： similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, the same…as, like, both, equally important, in the meantime, meanwhile, compared with 表 示 原 因 : because; as; since; for; owning to; due to; as a result of; on account of ；

表示对照：on the contrary; on the other hand; by contrast; unlike; whereas; rather than; conversely; instead; the opposite is true; in contrast; in comparison 表示转折: although; nevertheless; however; but; admittedly; it is true…but; in spite of; even though; yet; rather; while/although; despite

表示结果：thus; so; hence; consequently; therefore; accordingly; for this reason; as a consequence; therefore; as a result; generally speaking; 表示强调: chiefly; especially; indeed; in fact; certainly; particularly; to be sure; actually; above all; most important; worse; as a matter of fact; no doubt 表示顺承: and; also; furthermore; likewise; in addition (to); moreover; first; second; third etc.

表示递进: first; second; in the first place; in the second place; next; also; besides; furthermore; moreover; in addition; what is more; for one thing; for another; not only…but also 表示结论: in conclusion; in short; on the whole; finally; lastly; to sum up; to conclude; in any event; in brief; in summary; in a word

提纲式作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Advertising according to the following outline (given in Chinese). Your composition should be no less than 120 words. Remember to write your composition on the composition Sheet clearly and neatly. 1。广告的坏处 2。广告的好处 3。你的看法

Advertising The harmful effects of advertising are obvious. It is quite easy to find reasons for attacking advertising. Firstly, it tends to be extremely costly and this cost must eventually be paid by the consumers. Secondly, it uses up valuable human resources. The advertising profession occupies many of the best brains in any country. In addition, from the social standpoint, advertising promotes image over substance and a standardization of taste.

However, there also a number of persuasive arguments advanced in defense of advertising. In the first place, it had a valuable informative function, helping potential customers know about the characteristics, and prices of products or where they can buy a particular product cheaply. Then, by stimulating demand for successful products, adverting creates jobs in the manufacturing and service sectors.

If I must choose between living in a society with typical advertising or without advertising, personally, I prefer the former because advertising on the whole is good in spite of its deficiencies and problems. In my opinion, there is no need for us to give up eating for fear of choking.

命题式作文 Directions: For this part, you’re given 30 minutes to write a composition according to the title given below. Your writing should be less than 120 words and remember to write in readable handwriting on the Composition Sheet.

Mobile Phones Mobile phones, a product of modern electronics, are gaining increasing popularity among people in China. Several reasons account for the popularity of the mobile phones. Firstly, mobile phones are portable. people can carry them everywhere with great ease. Secondly, mobile phones can convey information with great speed.

On the other hand, mobile phones also have some disadvantages. Some people complain that mobile phones give unpleasant noise on some wrong occasions, like during a meeting, in an exam, or late at night. Moreover, the electromagnetic wave emitted from the phone is said to be harmful and does often cause headaches to the owner. Finally, people have to go to work sometimes because with the mobile phone the boss can reach them easily during their free time. This cuts into people’s spare time.

In my opinion, mobile phones, despite their disadvantages, are to stay in people’s lives in the near future. They have changed the way we communicate with each other and made our life more convenient.

图表作文 Directions： For the part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 120 words on Changes in people’s Diet. Study the following table carefully and your composition must be based on the information given in the table. Write three paragraphs to:

1. state the changes in people’s diet in the past five years. 2. Give possible reasons for the changes 3. draw your own conclusions You should quote as few figure as possible.

图表作文套路 第一段 As is clearly shown in the above table/graph (As can be seen from the above table. )…dropped from…in 1996 to…in 2000. According to the figures given in the table, … has greatly increased/decreased in the past years, reaching…in 2000. From the table we can also seen that there has been a sharp decline/rise in…

第二段 There are several possible reasons for …In the first place, …Let’s have an example to illustrate the great increase in… Second, …. Finally, …There may be some other factors responsible for… But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly acceptable.

第三段 As far as I am concerned, my ideas are as follows, … I am fully convinced that my opinion is both sound and well grounded.

表示数量增加，减少的句型 The consumption of milk rose dramatically from 1985 to 1990. The profit increased significantly from May to June. The number of private cars went up sharply from 2000 to 2002. The amount of computers soared in the past five years.

The use of solar energy climbed steadily between 1998 and 2001. There was a jump in the profit of sales in the past two years. There was a gradual increase in the amount of meat consumption between 1996 and 2000. There was a slow reduction of…

From the circle, we can see that space heating takes up the most energy consumption, it accounts for 48% of the total amount of energy. The second largest portion of energy (18%) is used for lighting, cooking, and running appliances. This is followed by water heating which expend 14% of the total. Refrigeration almost ranks the same as water heating, which is 13% of the whole amount of energy use. Among these energy consumption items, space cooling comes up to be the lowest, 7% of the whole. This circle shows that the largest portion of energy is spent on space heating. This puts us into deep thinking.

If we can find ways other than the present regular energy sources to supply family need for energy, then we can save up the traditional energy sources such as a coal, electricity, wood, etc. Solar energy might be a good answer to this problem. Therefore, more efforts should be made and more money should be spent on the research in this area. More people should be encouraged and supported to work on this issue. Maybe someday they can really enable us to enjoy the comforts of solar energy.

Grain 1987 1988 1989 1990 6 49% 47% 46. 5 45% Milk 10% 11% 12% 13% Meat 17% 20% 22. 5 Fruit and vegetables 24% 22% 20% 21% Total 100% % % 100% 23% 21% 100%

Changes in People’s Diet in China As is shown in the table, there have been great changes in people’s diet over the period from the year 1986 to the year 1990 in China. On one hand, the consumption of grain has dropped 4% during this period, and there has been an obvious decline while on the other hand, there has been a steady rise in the consumption of some highenergy foods, such as milk and meat.

What has caused the great changes in people’s diet? The main reason probably lies in the gradual increase of people’s income owing to the quick development of the country’s economy. Nowadays people can afford to purchase more expensive and more nutritious food. Another possible reason is that people are paying more attention to the food structure. They realize a better structure of food can help them stay healthy. Therefore, the old habits of eating a lot of grain and vegetables are abandoned by people.

In conclusion, in the past five years , people’s standard of living has been rising significantly and now people are enjoying a much better life than ever before.

情景式作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Cloning----a Blessing or a Curse? You must base your composition on the following instructions. (given in English) It goes without saying that Clone technology is a wonder in modern science. However, different people take different attitude as to its application. Your composition should be no less than 120 words. Remember to write it neatly.

Cloning ---- a Blessing or a Curse The term Clone is no longer new to us. It refers to the nonsexual reproduction of a single plant or animal from any cell, and with exactly the same form as the parent. It goes without saying that Clone technology is a wonder in science. However, different people take different attitude as to its application. Many people are excited about the success of Clone technology.

They think human beings can benefit a lot from it, as it offers the possibilities for human beings to breed excellent varieties of plants and animals by making use of the best gene. There are some other people who hold quite different opinions about this technique. They think that if abused, it will bring about a disaster. For example, if Clone technique is carried out on human beings, it will lead to moral, social as well as legal confusion. Moreover, we can’t yet predict what disaster it will bring about.

Therefore, it is safe to say that the Clone technique itself is innocent, but once it is put to unwise use, its destructive power will be uncontrollable. So it is important that we apply the clone technology properly and make it benefit human beings.

利弊分析型套路 Nowadays, ____(所要讨论的主题）plays an important part in people’s life. Like everything else, _____(所 要 讨 论 的 主 题 )has both advantages and disadvantages(favorable and unfavorable aspects). Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows. First, __________(第一个好处） Furthermore, ______________(第 二个好处). Most important of all, _____(第三个 好处）

But every coin has two sides. The unfavorable aspects are also apparent. To begin with, _________(第 一 个 坏 处 ） To make matters worse, __________(第 二 个 坏 处 )Worst of all, _________________ _(第三个坏处) From the above analysis, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore, __________________(结论）

Owning Private Cars Nowadays, private cars play an important part in people’s life. Like everything else, owing a private car has both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows. Firstly, it is convenient to go out with a private car. Furthermore, having a private car, people can also live in the country without worrying about the poor traffic system. Most important of all, the increase of private cars will promote the development of automobile industry and then benefit domestic economy.

But every coin has two sides. The unfavorable aspects are also apparent. To begin with, the more private cars moving in the street， the more energy they will consume while crude oil on earth is limited. To make matters worse, too many private cars will burden the traffic system and then cause traffic jams. Worst of all, too many private cars will do harm to environment around us. The gas they let off will pollute the air and the noise they make will make us nervous.

From the above analysis, I believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. Therefore, if we want to encourage people to purchase private cars, we shall create some new technology to improve private cars and relieve negative aspects first.

利弊分析型变体 Is Money All Powerful Money is considered by some people to the most important thing in life. They think that the majority of the material things in our daily life have to be bought with money and that they have money, they can make themselves very comfortable by having a fine house to live in, beautiful clothes to wear and delicious food to eat.

But others don’t believe that money can buy everything. Take time and health for example. Many people regret having lost their time, and no matter how much money they pay, they could not make a day longer 24 hours or call back the lost time. If someone gets some fatal disease, he can use a lot of money to stay in a luxurious hospital, but nothing can bring back his good health. Money, moreover, can be the source of some evils. some people are greedy for money and in order to get it, they even commit robbery or murder.

Therefore, we should take a correct attitude to money: it is necessary in our life but not all powerful.

问题解决型/方法途径型套路 _____________(目前 的现象及存在的问题）Many ways can contribute to ______(要解决的问题）， but the following ones may be most effective. One of these is that_______(第 一种方法）Another approach is ____________(第二种方法） Furthermore, ________(第三种方法) In conclusion, these are not the only three points you should pay attention to. But it should be noted that__________

How to Lose Weight With the improvement of people’s living condition, people can enjoy nice food, but nice food has made a lot of fat people. Some people decide to lose weight. Many ways can contribute to lose weight, but the following ones may be most effective. One of these is to take medicine to be slim quickly. But some of these medicines are harmful to our health. Another approach is to set a limit to high calorie food and eat more fruit. In doing so, we can reduce the fat but meanwhile, we may also hurt the stomach and the bowel. So this is not a perfect way,

either. The third one is to do physical exercises every day. In conclusion, these are not the only three ways to lose weight. However, it should be noted that the best way to lose weight is to do physical exercises every day. Only in this way can we not only lose weight but also improve our health.

My Ideal Career Since my childhood, I have been anxious to become an office-practice lawyer. And this is still my dream. There are several factors responsible for my choice. In general, they can come down to three major ones.

For one thing, I greatly admire the role of lawyers in TV plays of Hong Kong. From my point of view, they are very powerful, decisive, and responsible. And I am also eager to be such a person. For another, a lawyer usually has an abundance of income. That will give me a comfortable living condition. The prime factor is that I hope to be a white-collared clerk in a foreign-funded enterprise. Maybe, that hope is related to my personality. I am an extrovert girl and like to argue what is right and what is wrong.

From the forgoing, I make great efforts to realize my ideal-being an office-practice lawyer. In university, I try to learn the knowledge inside the books as much as possible. In my spare time, I take part in practice to enrich my knowledge outside the books.

议论文套路 Recently, the problem of …… has aroused public concern. Different people have different opinions. Some people believe that…But others hold that… As to me, I am on the first/second side of the argument. The reasons are as follows. First, _______(第一个理由） Second, ________(第二个理由)Finally, _____________(第三个理由) Therefore, based on the above discussion, it is not difficult to conclude why I__________(结论）

Live on or off Campus Recently, the problem of living on or off campus has aroused public concern. Different people have different opinions. Some people like to live off campus because of its freedom and comfort while others prefer to living on because of its convenience and low cost. As to me, I will choose to live on the campus. The reasons for this can be listed as follows.

Firstly, no one can deny the fact that it is far cheaper to live on the campus. After all, we are students without income. To rent a room off campus will cost my parents more money. Secondly, only when I live on the campus can I make full use of the facilities in school, such as the library, dinning halls, computer rooms, etc. Finally, I can take advantage of this opportunity to learn how to deal with others. Maybe, the experience of that will have a good effect on my future life. Therefore, based on the above discussion, it is not difficult to conclude why I prefer to live on the campus.

驳论套路 ————（目前的现象）There has been a heated argument about whether ______ (争论的焦点）. Some people are for it. They think that _______(支持者的观点） But others are against it. They think that______(反对者的观点)As to me, I am in favor of the first/second opinion. Certainly, _____（对方观点的合理性）， but it cannot be said that _____(反驳的理 由） There are many examples that can prove it. Here I just list some typical ones.

My View on Students’ Taking Part-time Jobs Now more and more university students take part-time jobs in their spare time. There has been a heated argument about whether university students should take them. Different people have different opinions. Some people are for it. They think that parttime jobs can enrich students’ experience. But others are against it. They think that part-time jobs will affect students’ study. As to me, I am in favor

Certainly, part-time jobs may affect students’ study, but it cannot be said that they are not beneficial to students. There are many examples that can prove it. Here I just list some typical ones. First, taking a part-time job can help a student pay the tuition. It is very profitable to some poor students. As another instance, it can increase a student’s working experience. It is useful to his future work. As still another instance, a students can study how to deal with the human relationships. To sum up, the experience of taking part-time job is beneficial to a university student.

• 1997年 1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Haste Makes Waste. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below. 1. 为什么“欲速则不达”？ 2. 举例说明。

Example : An English proverb says, / One of the great men once remarked, “Haste Makes Waste”. / Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb: …… It means that…… In other words, …… History/Our society abounds with the examples of “Haste Makes Waste”. ……. On the other hand/On the contrary, ……. For us college students, the saying/proverb has a profound and realistic significance: …….

• Haste Makes Waste By “Haste makes waste” is meant that one should do everything step by step. Even simple operations can easily be spoiled if we rush to complete them, neglecting important stages in the process. One should make full preparations before beginning an task. (注：spoilt=spoiled 被毁坏； Spare the rod, spoil the child. 棍棒出孝子) Take English study for example. Without a good command of pronunciation, we can never hope to speak in an understandable way. Similarly, if we do not learn to spell properly and to acquire a basic grasp of grammar, we will never succeed in writing good composition.

In short, laying a solid foundation is essential if we want to make achievements in our studies or work, or indeed in any other aspect of our lives. At every step, review what has been achieved and assess the problems ahead before moving to the next step. And remember, Rome was not built in a day. 注：laying a solid foundation 打下坚实的基础

• Practice Makes Perfect • There is an old saying in China: practice makes perfect. Practice is means and perfect is goal. Only when you do more practice can you make things perfect. This is true not only in our learning but also in other walks of life. • When we study English, we have so much to learn such as grammar, vocabulary and so on. In order to learn them well, we need do more practice. We must read a lot, write a lot and listen to a lot. Only after we have done more practice can we have a good command of it.

Another case in point is typing. A good typist can type fast and accurately. But you will not be surprised at her performance if you know how much time she has spent practicing. Through practice, she has improved both her typing speed and accuracy to be. • It goes without saying that practice makes perfect. Since all of us have realized the importance of practice, why not put it into practice? •

结尾句 • in short, in general, in one word, etc. 6)

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