Oscar REFERENCE TOOL The personal statement THE MOST

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Oscar REFERENCE TOOL

Oscar REFERENCE TOOL

The personal statement THE MOST IMPORTANT PAGE YOU HAVE EVER WRITTEN

The personal statement THE MOST IMPORTANT PAGE YOU HAVE EVER WRITTEN

Think about Why is there a personal statement? Why is it part of the

Think about Why is there a personal statement? Why is it part of the UCAS process? What will the universities do with it? How is writing a PS relevant to me if I am not applying for UCAS

Do you really? You are a good team player You always finish projects You

Do you really? You are a good team player You always finish projects You are excellent at statistics You are very good at debating? Are you really? TELL ME WHAT IT IS YOU DO!

SO WHAT? You did work experience? You read a book? You have a part

SO WHAT? You did work experience? You read a book? You have a part time job? You volunteer in the community? So what…? Tell the reader why they should care about these

To boldly go where no-one has gone before… You need a stand-out first line.

To boldly go where no-one has gone before… You need a stand-out first line. A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away… Dude, where’s my car? I know what you did last summer You know these films and you can remember exactly how they start

Oscar PREPARATION AND PERSONAL STATEMENT

Oscar PREPARATION AND PERSONAL STATEMENT

https: //oscar. hean. org. uk/home#fndtn-demo

https: //oscar. hean. org. uk/home#fndtn-demo

https: //oscar. causeway. education/statement/demo

https: //oscar. causeway. education/statement/demo

Improving the personal statement Okay, so I’ve got some good content I needs editing

Improving the personal statement Okay, so I’ve got some good content I needs editing now – it sounds a bit like I’m describing my shopping list Read it aloud to the mirror. Or the cat. Make changes When it sounds more like continuous prose, try reading it to a friend, teacher or parent But get them to listen properly – you are trying to make it sound fluent, so they need to let you finish, make notes and give feedback at the end instead of interrupting your flow every time they have a comment.

Getting feedback on my application Via Oscar Take a print out to your form

Getting feedback on my application Via Oscar Take a print out to your form tutor – UCAS has a print view that you can select and print