Nonfiction Chronological reports A newspaper article Week 4

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Non-fiction Chronological reports A newspaper article Week 4 Part 2

Non-fiction Chronological reports A newspaper article Week 4 Part 2

Chunk 1 Our reporter interviewed Mummy bear here is what she had to say.

Chunk 1 Our reporter interviewed Mummy bear here is what she had to say. My child aint sleeping proper since it all appened! An she broke me boys chair. Wount mind but its the only one we got for im! Kent believe this is appened, whys is it us the gormo goon girl chose to pick on?

Her speech was very informal, can we gather a bank of informal speech like

Her speech was very informal, can we gather a bank of informal speech like phrases? What informal words do you know? Record on your inspiration page. Click here to see some of mine. ain't, gunna, init, wos, cos, ennit,

Task 1 My turn: Sub heading. (Write on your story page) The Word in

Task 1 My turn: Sub heading. (Write on your story page) The Word in the Wood. Mummy Bear (aged 47) who is currently unemployed explained how hard this attack has been on her family. "My child aint sleeping proper, 'cos he is scared of that horrible girl, we was so happy before this all happened. " Your turn: Write the subheading The Word in the Wood. Include 'Mummy Bear's' dialogue littered with informal and colloquial words and phrases. Extension - Deepen the Moment.

Chunk 2 We are now going to gather a bank of addition conjunctions/phrases, using

Chunk 2 We are now going to gather a bank of addition conjunctions/phrases, using very formal language. We will use this to provide a shift in the formality of the dialogue when the reporter explains. My examples are such as, further more, in addition, this was further substantiated, qualified by Can you think of any to add? Write them down or select one of mine to magpie.

Task 2 My turn- During our interview the severity of the crime was further

Task 2 My turn- During our interview the severity of the crime was further substantiated by P. C Bobby Badger’s comments. Your turn - Construct sentence using your own addition phrase, see if you can change the words underlined to one you like. Extension Deepen the Moment but don’t quote what your police officer said, this will be in the next session.

Plenary Read through your work, on reflection are there any words you wish to

Plenary Read through your work, on reflection are there any words you wish to improve by thinking of a synonym?