Nonfiction Chronological reports A newspaper article Friday L

Non-fiction Chronological reports A newspaper article Friday

L. O. To write effective sentences to build a newspaper report. S. C Collect and use formal language in my writing with support. Review my work so far and edit to improve Understand apply passive voice and shift the formality of the dialogue effectively

Chunk 1 We are now going to start our next paragraph with a more formal interview of a police officer. We are going to try to shift the formality as the police officers comments are going to be far more official than the comments we got from Mummy bear and we are going to try to apply passive voice. Can you think of addition conjunction/ phrases such as furthermore? Write down your ideas on your inspiration page and then turn to the next slide to compare yours with mine. My idea is: This was agreed with by…

Chunk 1 Can you think of addition conjunction/ phrases such as furthermore? Write down your ideas on your inspiration page and then turn to the next slide to compare yours with mine. Mine are: Further more In addition This was further qualified by This was substantiated by This was echoed by

Chunk 1 We are going to apply passive voice. Teacher model- During our interview the severity of the crime was echoed by P. C Bobby Badger. Can you see how I have spoken about the crime first? If it was active voice it would say: P. C. Bobby Badger …

Task 1 My turn- During our interview the severity of the crime was further substantiated by P. C Bobby Badger’s comments. Your turn - Construct sentence using your own addition phrase, see if you can change the words underlined to one you like. Extension Deepen the Moment but don’t quote what your police officer said, this will come next.

Chunk 2 We are going to watch a short police report. When watching jot down any formal language you notice the police officer using. We will share our ideas at the end. Click on the link https: //video. link/w/OBOVb

Here is some of the language I spotted. Did you get any of these? We are going to create a sentence that the officer may have said when being asked about the crime that occurred at the three bears house. Could you magpie any of my ideas? Conducting several missions, made arrests, safe guarded vulnerable people, anti social behaviour and crimes, safely detained, operation, bring criminals to justice, recovered a significant amount of stolen goods, negative day for the community, plague of this area, we will not stand for this in our communities, we are here to enforce, protect people

Task 2 My turn: "It was brought to my attention that a disturbance had occurred. By the time I had attended the incident, there was a state of disarray caused by anti social behaviour. The property owners have reported a series of unusual crimes which we will not stand for in our community. " Notice my formal language and the use of punctuation, inverted commas and punctuation mark before the closing inverted comma! Your Turn: include a formal quote from the police officer using high order language and formality.

Task 3 Read through your news report so far. Does it flow? Does it make sense? Can you edit and improve it with better word choices? Can you spot any missing punctuation? Please read it through and make sure that your work is the best it can be!