Marshmallows Use the link below to watch the
Marshmallows Use the link below to watch the film https: //www. youtube. com/watch? v=Gw. XFVq. Ku. H-w
Today you are going to continue to create a setting for a story Watch the film again up to 18 seconds. Pay attention to the setting. This time think about what sounds can you hear?
Sounds Owl hooting Water bubbling Cricket chirping Fire cracking
Setting description plan The order you will describe the setting Lake Moon Mountain Trees Camp fire What would you hear? What would you see? Use fronted adverbials Use a range of adjectives Use similes
Now start your setting description. Start thinking about the lake It was a clear, cold night. In the distance, the calm water rippled … The quiet bubbling sound of the lake stretched …
Now start thinking about the moon Mountain trees fire
Success Criteria In my writing I can … Write in the past tense –was, had, started, noticed , Use punctuation correctly. , ! ? “ “ Use a CAPITAL LETTER at the beginning of a sentence and for proper nouns (person, place) Organise paragraphs around a theme Use conjunctions – when if because although since until Adverbs – then later soon always recently today Prepositions - before after with above during on Use rich vocabulary and adjectives to describe the character Large huge small round straight spikey silently gently peacefully calmly vast Use fronted adverbials with a comma afterwards Where – In the distance, Far away, Beside the lake, By the edge of the lake, Around the fire, On the water, High above the forest, In the sky, On the ground, Use similes to describe The …. was like a …… It was as …… Me
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