Lesson 9 PreWriting Creating an Outline 1 Now

Lesson 9 Pre-Writing – Creating an Outline 1

Now that you have filled out a pre-writing outline, we’re going to go over it and decide on a common outline that everyone can use to write an essay. If we choose to use something other than what you have chosen, it is not because you are wrong, but because we all must have the same outline. So, here we go. Let’s see if you came up with the same information that we did. 2

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Make a Claim about both texts What did you come up with for a Claim about both texts? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 4

Make a Claim about both texts Charles Dickens in Oliver Twist and James Joyce in A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man introduce us to characters by allowing us to hear their voices. This is what we have decided to use. 5

Make a Claim about both texts Charles Dickens in Oliver Twist and James Joyce in A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man introduce us to characters by allowing us to hear their voices. If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 6

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Identify a Similarity between the two texts What did you come up with for a Similarity between the two texts? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 8

Identify a Similarity between the Both passages present evil two texts characters that are in conflict with the main character through dialogue. This is what we have decided to use. 9

Identify a Similarity between the Both passages present evil two texts characters that are in conflict with the main character through dialogue. If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 10

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Identify a Difference between the two Characters in the texts What did you come up with for a Difference in the Characters between the two texts? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 12

Identify a Difference between Oliver Twist doesn’t have a the two Characters in the texts sympathetic figure in any other character. A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man presents a sympathetic character (Fleming) that shadows the main character (Stephen). This is what we have decided to use. 13

Identify a Difference between Oliver Twist doesn’t have a the two Characters in the texts sympathetic figure in any other character. A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man presents a sympathetic character (Fleming) that shadows the main character (Stephen). If this is different from what you have in your prewriting outline, change it now. 14

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Key Words from Claims 1 -3 What did you come up with for your Key Words from Claims 1 -3? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 16

Key Words from Claims 1 -3 evil characters in conflict with the main character dialogue This is what we have decided to use. 17

Key Words from Claims 1 -3 evil characters in conflict with the main character dialogue If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 18

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Synonyms and Synonym Phrases for Key Words What did you come up with for Synonyms and Synonym Phrases for your Key Words? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 20

Synonyms and Synonym Phrases evil characters in conflict with the main character – antagonists for Key Words main character – protagonist dialogue – characters’ words, spoken words, voice This is what we have decided to use. 21

Synonyms and Synonym Phrases evil characters in conflict with the main character – antagonists for Key Words main character – protagonist dialogue – characters’ words, spoken words, voice If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 22

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Claim about the First Text What did you come up with for a Claim about the First Text? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 24

Claim about the First Text Dialogue develops characters in Oliver Twist This is what we have decided to use. 25

Claim about the First Text Dialogue develops characters in Oliver Twist If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 26

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Example in your own words that proves your Claim of Similarity from the First Text What would be a good example that proves the Claim of Similarity from the First Text? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 28

Example in your own words that Oliver is miserable and is elected proves your Claim of Similarity by the other starving boys to ask for more food. from the First Text This is what we have decided to use. 29

Example in your own words that Oliver is miserable and is elected proves your Claim of Similarity by the other starving boys to ask for more food. from the First Text If this is different from what you have in your prewriting outline, change it now. 30

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Quote (or quotes) that supports your example What would be a good quote (or quotes) to support the example? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 32

Quote (or quotes) that supports your example “Please, sir, I want some more. ” This is what we have decided to use. 33

Quote (or quotes) that supports your example “Please, sir, I want some more. ” If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 34

At this point, your teacher will either instruct you to continue the outline or will distribute the rest of the completed outline. 35

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Another Example in your own words that proves your Claim of Similarity from the First Text What would be another good example to prove the claim? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 37

Another Example in your own Mr. Limbkins’ is insulted to hear of words that proves your Claim of Oliver’s request Similarity from the First Text This is what we have decided to use. 38

Another Example in your own Mr. Limbkins’ is insulted to hear of words that proves your Claim of Oliver’s request Similarity from the First Text If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 39

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Quote (or quotes) that supports your example What would be a good quote that supports the example? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 41

Quote (or quotes) that supports your example “For more!” “Do I understand that he asked for more, after he had eaten the support allotted by the dietary? ” “That boy will be hung” “I know that boy will be hung. ” This is what we have decided to use. 42

Quote (or quotes) that supports your example “For more!” “Do I understand that he asked for more, after he had eaten the support allotted by the dietary? ” “That boy will be hung” “I know that boy will be hung. ” If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 43

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Claim about the Second Text What did you come up with for a Claim about the Second Text? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 45

Claim about the Second Text Dialogue plays a similar role in A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man. This is what we have decided to use. 46

Claim about the Second Text Dialogue plays a similar role in A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man. If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 47

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Example in your own words that proves your Claim of Similarity from the Second Text What would be a good Example that proves the Claim of Similarity from the Second Text? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 49

Example in your own words that proves your Claim of Similarity from the Second Text His conversation, or rather lack of conversation, with the other boys reveals that he is shy, scared, and lonely. This is what we have decided to use. 50

Example in your own words that proves your Claim of Similarity from the Second Text His conversation, or rather lack of conversation, with the other boys reveals that he is shy, scared, and lonely. If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 51

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Quote (or quotes) that supports your example What would be a good quote to support the example? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 53

Quote (or quotes) that supports your example “I don’t know. ” This is what we have decided to use. 54

Quote (or quotes) that supports your example “I don’t know. ” If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 55

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Another Example in your own words that proves your Claim of Similarity from the Second Text What would be another good Example that proves your Claim of Similarity from the Second Text? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 57

Another Example in your own Stephen later responds with brief words that proves your Claim of answers. Similarity from the Second Text This is what we have decided to use. 58

Another Example in your own Stephen later responds with brief words that proves your Claim of answers. Similarity from the Second Text If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 59

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Quote (or quotes) that supports your example What would be a good Quote (or quotes) that supports the example? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 61

Quote (or quotes) that supports your example “I do. ” Then when the boys laugh at his answer he changes it to, “I do not. ” This is what we have decided to use. 62

Quote (or quotes) that supports your example “I do. ” Then when the boys laugh at his answer he changes it to, “I do not. ” If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 63

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Claim about the Difference between the characters in the two texts What did you come up with for a Claim about the Difference between the Characters in the two texts? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 65

Claim about the Difference of One notable difference between the Characters between the two texts is the absence of a sympathetic figure, other than Oliver, in Oliver Twist, and the inclusion of one in A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man. This is what we have decided to use. 66

Claim about the Difference of One notable difference between the Characters between the two texts is the absence of a sympathetic figure, other than Oliver, in Oliver Twist, and the inclusion of one in A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man. If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 67

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Example in your own words that proves your Claim of Difference of Characters from the First Text What would be a good example to prove the claim about the Differences in Characters? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 69

Example in your own words that The boys aren’t sympathetic to proves your Claim of Difference Oliver when it’s time for him to of Characters from the First Text ask for more food. Mr. Bumble is totally shocked, the head of the orphanage condemns Oliver. This is what we have decided to use. 70

Example in your own words that The boys aren’t sympathetic to proves your Claim of Difference Oliver when it’s time for him to of Characters from the First Text ask for more food. Mr. Bumble is totally shocked, the head of the orphanage condemns Oliver. If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 71

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Quote (or quotes) that supports your example What would be a good quote to support the example? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 73

Quote (or quotes) that supports your example They “whispered each other, and winked at Oliver while his next neighbors nudged him. ” “What!” said the head master at length, in a faint voice. “Mr. Limbkins, I beg your pardon, sir! Oliver Twist has asked for more!” “That boy will be hung. ” This is what we have decided to use. 74

Quote (or quotes) that supports your example They “whispered each other, and winked at Oliver while his next neighbors nudged him. ” “What!” said the head master at length, in a faint voice. “Mr. Limbkins, I beg your pardon, sir! Oliver Twist has asked for more!” “That boy will be hung. ” If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 75

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Example in your own words that proves your Claim of a Difference in Characters from the Second Text What did you come up with for an Example that proves your Claim of a Difference in Characters from the Second Text? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 77

Example in your own words that Fleming, in A Portrait of the Artist proves your Claim of a as a Young Man, is kind and Difference in Characters from the sympathetic to Stephen. Second Text This is what we have decided to use. 78

Example in your own words that Fleming, in A Portrait of the Artist proves your Claim of a as a Young Man, is kind and Difference in Characters from the sympathetic to Stephen. Second Text If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 79

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Quote (or quotes) that supports your example What would be a good Quote (or quotes) that supports the example? Raise your hand to share your answer and earn points from today’s assessment rubric. 81

Quote (or quotes) that supports your example “What’s up? Have you a pain or what’s up with you? ” “Sick in your breadbasket, because your face looks white. It will go away. ” This is what we have decided to use. 82

Quote (or quotes) that supports your example “What’s up? Have you a pain or what’s up with you? ” “Sick in your breadbasket, because your face looks white. It will go away. ” If this is different from what you have in your pre -writing outline, change it now. 83

We have now completed a common outline that the entire class can follow to write an essay comparing and contrasting how the dialogue in Olive Twist and in A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man functions to reveal aspects of the main characters. 84

We have now completed a common outline that the entire class can follow to write an essay comparing and contrasting how the dialogue in Olive Twist and in A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man functions to reveal aspects of the main characters. Your completed outline is on the next seven slides. 85

1. Make a Claim about both texts Charles Dickens in Oliver Twist and James Joyce in A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man introduce us to characters by allowing us to hear their voices. 2. Identify a Similarity between the two texts Both passages present evil characters that are in conflict with the main character through dialogue. 3. Identify a Difference in Characters in the Oliver Twist doesn’t have a sympathetic two texts character for the main character (Oliver). A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man presents a sympathetic character (Fleming) that shadows the main character (Stephen). 86

4. Key Words from Claims 1 -3 evil characters in conflict with the main character 5. Synonyms and Synonym Phrases for Key Words dialogue evil characters in conflict with the main character – antagonists main character – protagonist dialogue – characters’ words, spoken words, voice 6. Claim about the First Text Dialogue develops characters in Oliver Twist 87

7. Example in your own words that proves your Claim of Similarity from the First Text Oliver is a miserable boy living in an orphanage and suffering from slow starvation. Although kept in check by fear of the patriarchs of this dismal establishment, Oliver is elected by the other starving boys to ask for more food. Demonstrating fortitude far beyond his age, Oliver summons the temerity to rebel against the rule of the orphanage. He dramatically asks for more food. “Please, sir, I want some more. ” 8. Quote (or quotes) that supports your example 9. Another Example in your own words that Mr. Limbkins’ character is also revealed proves your Claim of Similarity from the through his own words. He is insulted to hear First Text of Oliver’s request, confirms the breech of etiquette committed by Oliver, and shoots back an extreme response. 88

10. Quote (or quotes) that supports your example “For more!” “Do I understand that he asked for more, after he had eaten the support allotted by the dietary? ” “That boy will be hung” “I know that boy will be hung. ” 11. Claim about the Second Text Dialogue plays a similar role in A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man. 12. Example in your own words that Stephen, the protagonist, is a shy, scared, and proves your Claim of Similarity from lonely boy. His conversation, or rather lack of the Second Text conversation, with the other boys reveals these aspects of Stephen’s state of mind. 13. Quote (or quotes) that supports your example When Fleming asks him about what’s wrong with him, Stephen answers with a brief, “I don’t know. ” 89

14. Another Example in your own words that proves your Claim of Similarity from the Second Text Stephen later responds with more brief answers to another question from another boy. 15. Quote (or quotes) that supports your example When Wells asks him if he kisses his mother good night, Stephen answers, “I do. ” Then when the boys laugh at his answer he changes it to, “I do not. ” 16. Claim about the Differences in Characters between the two texts One notable difference between the two texts is the absence of a sympathetic figure, other than Oliver, in Oliver Twist, and the inclusion of one in A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man. 90

17. Example in your own words that proves The boys aren’t sympathetic to Oliver when your Claim of Difference of Characters it’s time for him to ask for more food. Mr. from the First Text Bumble is totally shocked and reports Oliver to the head of the orphanage. The head of the orphanage condemns Oliver. 18. Quote (or quotes) that supports your They “whispered each other, and winked at example Oliver while his next neighbors nudged him. ” “What!” said the head master at length, in a faint voice. “Mr. Limbkins, I beg your pardon, sir! Oliver Twist has asked for more!” “That boy will be hung. ” 19. Example in your own words that proves Conversely, Fleming, in A Portrait of the your Claim of Difference of Characters Artist as a Young Man, is kind and sympathetic from the Second Text to Stephen. His dialogue speaks to the reader’s emotions. 91

20. Quote (or quotes) that supports your example “What’s up? Have you a pain or what’s up with you? ” “Sick in your breadbasket, because your face looks white. It will go away. ” 92