Lesson 6 Fleshing out a Preliminary Outline with

Lesson 6. Fleshing out a Preliminary Outline with Source 2 1

Here’s a demonstration of how to take more notes and add them to your preliminary outline. 2

Here’s a demonstration of how to take more notes and add them to your preliminary outline. This is how one student took more notes. 3

What are Wildlife Preserves? Land reserved and managed to protect wildlife and vegetation and research (4) Where are Wildlife Preserves found? Located throughout the world (1) What is the purpose of Wildlife Preserves? To retain their natural properties to provide for unique needs of vegetation and wildlife that lives there (2) This is one student’s outline from Source 1 Help preservationists extend land conservation to cities, towns and neighborhoods (6) What can be done to help Wildlife Preserves? Preserves need to be more than just tourist attraction (7) All countries must make preservation focus of planning and development of land (11) Who designates Wildlife Preserves? Government institutions, private land owners, charities, research institutions or preservation organizations create preserves (8) 4

What are Wildlife Preserves? Land reserved and managed to protect wildlife and vegetation and research (4) Where are Wildlife Preserves found? Located throughout the world (1) What is the purpose of Wildlife Preserves? To retain their natural properties to provide for unique needs of vegetation and wildlife that lives there (2) Help preservationists extend land conservation to cities, towns and neighborhoods (6) The writer has 5 headings and 7 relevant pieces of information. What can be done to help Wildlife Preserves? Preserves need to be more than just tourist attraction (7) All countries must make preservation focus of planning and development of land (11) Who designates Wildlife Preserves? Government institutions, private land owners, charities, research institutions or preservation organizations create preserves (8) 5

What are Wildlife Preserves? Land reserved and managed to protect wildlife and vegetation and research (4) Where are Wildlife Preserves found? Located throughout the world (1) What is the purpose of Wildlife Preserves? To retain their natural properties to provide for unique needs of vegetation and wildlife that lives there (2) Here’s the next piece of information Help preservationists extend land conservation to cities, towns and neighborhoods (6) What can be done to help Wildlife Preserves? Preserves need to be more than just tourist attraction (7) All countries must make preservation focus of planning and development of land (11) Who designates Wildlife Preserves? Government institutions, private land owners, charities, research institutions or preservation organizations create preserves (8) 6

What are Wildlife Preserves? Land reserved and managed to protect wildlife and vegetation and research (4) Where are Wildlife Preserves found? Located throughout the world (1) What is the purpose of Wildlife Preserves? To retain their natural properties to provide for unique needs of vegetation and wildlife that lives there (2) Help preservationists extend land conservation to cities, towns and neighborhoods (6) What can be done to help Wildlife Preserves? The National Wildlife Refuge System has set aside protected areas for America’s fish, plants and wildlife. (4) Preserves need to be more than just tourist attraction (7) All countries must make preservation focus of planning and development of land (11) Who designates Wildlife Preserves? Government institutions, private land owners, charities, research institutions or preservation organizations create preserves (8) 7

What are Wildlife Preserves? Land reserved and managed to protect wildlife and vegetation and research (4) Where are Wildlife Preserves found? Located throughout the world (1) What is the purpose of Wildlife Preserves? This piece of information details the purpose of a specific Wildlife Refuge System. To retain their natural properties to provide for unique needs of vegetation and wildlife that lives there (2) Help preservationists extend land conservation to cities, towns and neighborhoods (6) What can be done to help Wildlife Preserves? The National Wildlife Refuge System has set aside protected areas for America’s fish, plants and wildlife. (13) Preserves need to be more than just tourist attraction (7) All countries must make preservation focus of planning and development of land (11) Who designates Wildlife Preserves? Government institutions, private land owners, charities, research institutions or preservation organizations create preserves (8) 8

What are Wildlife Preserves? Land reserved and managed to protect wildlife and vegetation and research (4) Where are Wildlife Preserves found? Located throughout the world (1) What is the purpose of Wildlife Preserves? So it would belong under the heading: “What is the purpose of Wildlife Preserves? ” To retain their natural properties to provide for unique needs of vegetation and wildlife that lives there (2) Help preservationists extend land conservation to cities, towns and neighborhoods (6) What can be done to help Wildlife Preserves? The National Wildlife Refuge System has set aside protected areas for America’s fish, plants and wildlife. (13) Preserves need to be more than just tourist attraction (7) All countries must make preservation focus of planning and development of land (11) Who designates Wildlife Preserves? Government institutions, private land owners, charities, research institutions or preservation organizations create preserves (8) 9

What are Wildlife Preserves? Land reserved and managed to protect wildlife and vegetation and research (4) Where are Wildlife Preserves found? Located throughout the world (1) So that’s where we’ll place it What is the purpose of Wildlife Preserves? To retain their natural properties to provide for unique needs of vegetation and wildlife that lives there (2) Help preservationists extend land conservation to cities, towns and neighborhoods (6) What can be done to help Wildlife Preserves? The National Wildlife Refuge System has set aside protected areas for America’s fish, plants and wildlife. (13) Preserves need to be more than just tourist attraction (7) All countries must make preservation focus of planning and development of land (11) Who designates Wildlife Preserves? Government institutions, private land owners, charities, research institutions or preservation organizations create preserves (8) 10

What are Wildlife Preserves? Land reserved and managed to protect wildlife and vegetation and research (4) Where are Wildlife Preserves found? Located throughout the world (1) What is the purpose of Wildlife Preserves? To retain their natural properties to provide for unique needs of vegetation and wildlife that lives there (2) Help preservationists extend land conservation to cities, towns and neighborhoods (6) The National Wildlife Refuge System has set aside protected areas for America’s fish, plants and wildlife (13) The National Wildlife Refuge System has set aside protected areas for America’s fish, plants and wildlife. (13) What can be done to help Wildlife Preserves? Preserves need to be more than just tourist attraction (7) All countries must make preservation focus of planning and development of land (11) Who designates Wildlife Preserves? Government institutions, private land owners, charities, research institutions or preservation organizations create preserves (8) 11

What are Wildlife Preserves? Land reserved and managed to protect wildlife and vegetation and research (4) Where are Wildlife Preserves found? Located throughout the world (1) The next piece of information that this student found is: What is the purpose of Wildlife Preserves? To retain their natural properties to provide for unique needs of vegetation and wildlife that lives there (2) Help preservationists extend land conservation to cities, towns and neighborhoods (6) The National Wildlife Refuge System has set aside protected areas for America’s fish, plants and wildlife (13) What can be done to help Wildlife Preserves? Preserves need to be more than just tourist attraction (7) All countries must make preservation focus of planning and development of land (11) Who designates Wildlife Preserves? Government institutions, private land owners, charities, research institutions or preservation organizations create preserves (8) 12

What are Wildlife Preserves? Land reserved and managed to protect wildlife and vegetation and research (4) Where are Wildlife Preserves found? Located throughout the world (1) What is the purpose of Wildlife Preserves? To retain their natural properties to provide for unique needs of vegetation and wildlife that lives there (2) Help preservationists extend land conservation to cities, towns and neighborhoods (6) The National Wildlife Refuge System has set aside protected areas for America’s fish, plants and wildlife (13) What can be done to help Wildlife Preserves? Preserves need to be more than just tourist attraction (7) All countries must make preservation focus of planning and development of land (11) Who designates Wildlife Preserves? There are many issues such as urban development, climate change, increasing demands for energy development, and degradation of water quality that negatively impact the Nation Wildlife Refuge System. (27) Government institutions, private land owners, charities, research institutions or preservation organizations create preserves (8) 13

What are Wildlife Preserves? Land reserved and managed to protect wildlife and vegetation and research (4) Where are Wildlife Preserves found? Located throughout the world (1) What is the purpose of Wildlife Preserves? To retain their natural properties to provide for unique needs of vegetation and wildlife that lives there (2) Help preservationists extend land conservation to cities, towns and neighborhoods (6) The National Wildlife Refuge System has set aside protected areas for America’s fish, plants and wildlife (13) What can be done to help Wildlife Preserves? Preserves need to be more than just tourist attraction (7) All countries must make preservation focus of planning and development of land (11) Who designates Wildlife Preserves? This piece of information from Source 2 does not fit with any of the headings from Source 1 so a new heading will be created: There are many issues such as urban development, climate change, increasing demands for energy development, and degradation of water quality that negatively impact the Nation Wildlife Refuge System. (27) Government institutions, private land owners, charities, research institutions or preservation organizations create preserves (8) 14

What are Wildlife Preserves? Land reserved and managed to protect wildlife and vegetation and research (4) Where are Wildlife Preserves found? What are the concerns of the New National Wildlife Refuge System? Heading Located throughout the world (1) What is the purpose of Wildlife Preserves? To retain their natural properties to provide for unique needs of vegetation and wildlife that lives there (2) Help preservationists extend land conservation to cities, towns and neighborhoods (6) The National Wildlife Refuge System has set aside protected areas for America’s fish, plants and wildlife (13) The new heading (What are the concerns of the National Wildlife Refuge System? ) What can be done to help Wildlife Preserves? Preserves need to be more than just tourist attraction (7) All countries must make preservation focus of planning and development of land (11) Who designates Wildlife Preserves? Government institutions, private land owners, charities, research institutions or preservation organizations create preserves (8) 15

What are Wildlife Preserves? Land reserved and managed to protect wildlife and vegetation and research (4) Where are Wildlife Preserves found? Located throughout the world (1) What is the purpose of Wildlife Preserves? To retain their natural properties to provide for unique needs of vegetation and wildlife that lives there (2) Help preservationists extend land conservation to cities, What are the concerns of the National Wildlife Refuge System? There are many issues such as urban development, climate change, New increasing demands for energy information development and degradation of water from Source quality and quantity that negatively 2 impact the National Wildlife Refuge System. (27) towns and neighborhoods (6) The National Wildlife Refuge System has set aside protected areas for America’s fish, plants and wildlife (13) What can be done to help Wildlife Preserves? Preserves need to be more than just tourist attraction (7) All countries must make preservation focus of planning and development of land (11) Who designates Wildlife Preserves? Government institutions, private land owners, charities, research institutions or preservation organizations create preserves (8) and information from Source 2 (There are many issues such as urban development, climate change, increasing demands for energy development and degradation of water quality and quantity that negatively impact the National Wildlife Refuge System. ) added to the Preliminary Outline from 16 Source 1

Exercise 1 17

Now flesh out your outline by combining the notes you took from Source 1 with the notes you took from Source 2. 18

Now flesh out your outline by combining the notes you took from Source 1 with the notes you took from Source 2. Whenever possible, add the notes from Source 2 under the headings you have already created for Source 1. 19

Now flesh out your outline by combining the notes you took from Source 1 to with notes you took from Source 2. Whenever possible, add the notes from Source 2 under the headings you have already created for Source 1. But if the new notes don’t fit anywhere, create new headings as you need them 20