Lesson 36 Evaluating an Exemplar Third Body Paragraph

Lesson 36 Evaluating an Exemplar Third Body Paragraph for the RST 1

Evaluating an Exemplar Third Body Paragraph We will look at the exemplar third body paragraph and pick out the strengths of the paragraph. Notice that some words or phrases represent more than one strength. 2

What strength do you see highlighted here? The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one -fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 3

Here’s the strength. The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. First sentence is Indented. 4

What strength do you see highlighted here? The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 5

Here’s the strength. The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. States a Claim about Source 3. 6

What strength do you see highlighted here? The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No Sound to Help the Mind See. one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 7

Here’s the strength. The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. An Example that helps prove the claim. 8

What strength do you see highlighted here? The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 9

Here’s the strength. The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, onefifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. A Quote that supports the example and helps prove the claim. 10

What strength do you see highlighted here? The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of word "Cut!" sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 11

Here’s the strength. The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. An Explanation of the Quote that helps prove the claim. 12

What strength do you see highlighted here? The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 13

Here’s the strength. The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another Example that helps prove the claim. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 14

What strength do you see highlighted here? The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 15

Here’s the strength. The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at A Quote that supports the example. conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, onefifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 16

What strength do you see highlighted here? The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 17

Here’s the strength. The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in An Explanation of the Quote that supports the claim. This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is our own biology. . . be switched on. ” impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 18

What strength do you see highlighted here? The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" was at This clearly shows how important sound one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 19

Here’s the strength. The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No Uses Appropriate Transitions. This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 20

What strength do you see highlighted here? The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 21

Here’s the strength. The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author Uses Explanation Words and Phrases. points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 22

What strength do you see highlighted here? The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 23

Here’s the strength. The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be Uses Domain Specific Words for an analytical essay. switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 24

What strength do you see highlighted here? The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 25

Here’s the strength. The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture Uses Higher Level Vocabulary Words. itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these 26

What strength do you see highlighted here? The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 27

Here’s the strength. The enigma of sound is further explored by an historian in Stretching Sound to Help the Mind See. This reflective look begins with a nostalgic remembrance of the importance of sound in the film industry as the author describes the power of the sound director, “No one could contradict …. the word "Cut!" This clearly shows how important sound was at one time but then the author points out that it has been supplanted by the picture itself. Another part of the enigma of sound is the tenuous position it holds even at conception in the womb. This mystery is, “hidden in our own biology. . . be switched on. ” This example would lead one to believe that sound would remain as our number one sense, but it doesn’t. At birth, it is subjugated to sight. Uses an Appositive. Sound, one-fifth of our senses, is impossible to define, replicate, or understand and, mysteriously to the authors of these articles, takes a back seat to sight. 28

Notice This paragraph hit two triple’s. The triple is always: 1. Example 2. Quote 3. Explanation Here they are again separated so you can see them easily. 29

Time to Revise Your Writing Now that you have evaluated an exemplar third body paragraph, use what you have learned to revise the paragraph that you wrote. Do not copy the exemplar paragraph but use it as a guide to make your paragraph better. Show your revisions by crossing out words, phrases, and sentences and writing improved words, phrases and sentences above them. Draw arrows and carats (an inverted v, ) to show an insert of additional words, phrases, and sentences. 30