Lesson 34 Evaluating an Exemplar Second Body Paragraph

Lesson 34 Evaluating an Exemplar Second Body Paragraph for the RST 1

Evaluating an Exemplar Second Body Paragraph We will look at the exemplar second body paragraph and pick out the strengths of the paragraph. Notice that some words or phrases represent more than one strength. 2

What strength do you see highlighted here? Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. 3

Here’s the strength. Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. First sentence is Indented. 4

What strength do you see highlighted here? Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. 5

Here’s the strength. Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. States the Claim about the first text. 6

What strength do you see highlighted here? Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. 7

Here’s the strength. Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. An Example in your own words that proves your claim about the second text. 8

What strength do you see highlighted here? Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. 9

Here’s the strength. Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was A Quote that supports the example that helps prove your claim. formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. 10

What strength do you see highlighted here? Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. 11

Here’s the strength. Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported An Explanation of the Quote that helps to prove the claim. by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. 12

What strength do you see highlighted here? Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. 13

Here’s the strength. Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. A Domain Specific Word for an analytical essay. 14

What strength do you see highlighted here? Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. 15

Here’s the strength. Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. Uses Higher Level Vocabulary Words. 16

What strength do you see highlighted here? Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. 17

Here’s the strength. Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. Uses Explanation words. 18

What strength do you see highlighted here? Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. 19

Here’s the strength. Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. Uses Appropriate Transitions. 20

Notice This paragraph hit a triple. The triple is always: 1. Example 2. Quote 3. Explanation Here they are again separated so you can see them easily. 21

Example Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the Planet Collision. protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. 22

Quote Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and “that Earth's satellite was formed when the protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. 23

Explanation Still another way that evidence from the Apollos missions defeated or supported beliefs about the earth’s formation is examined in Moon Formation May Have Been the Result of Larger, Faster Planet Collision. This article outlines the possibility of another planet colliding with earth and forming the moon out of the collision, suggesting, “that Earth's satellite was formed when the This theory is supported by evidence because it would explain why the moon seems to be made entirely of the same stuff comprising the earth. There is, however a problem protoplanet was hit by a second world, believed to have been about the size of Mars. ” with this theory. The evidence suggests that, if this is true, the planet believed to have collided with earth, “was actually larger, moving at faster speeds, and colliding with the Earth at a steeper angle. ” Here the evidence from the Apollo missions helped explain one part of theory but put another part in question. 24

Time to Revise Your Writing Now that you have evaluated an exemplar second body paragraph, use what you have learned to revise the paragraph that you wrote. Do not copy the exemplar paragraph but use it as a guide to make your paragraph better. Show your revisions by crossing out words, phrases, and sentences and writing improved words, phrases and sentences above them. Draw arrows and carats (an inverted v, ) to show an insert of additional words, phrases, and sentences. 25