Hey answer Hey She said Hey dialogue tag

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Hey.

Hey.

answer: “Hey. ”

answer: “Hey. ”

She said Hey. dialogue tag

She said Hey. dialogue tag

lower case dialogue tag Hey, she said . ,

lower case dialogue tag Hey, she said . ,

She ___ Hey, she ___

She ___ Hey, she ___

Wait!

Wait!

She said Wait! dialogue tag

She said Wait! dialogue tag

lower case Wait! she said

lower case Wait! she said

She ___ Wait! she ___

She ___ Wait! she ___

Well?

Well?

He said Well?

He said Well?

Well? he said

Well? he said

He ___ Well? he ___

He ___ Well? he ___

Hey, wait.

Hey, wait.

Hey, she said wait.

Hey, she said wait.

¶ Hey, she said wait. ¶ He asked, Well?

¶ Hey, she said wait. ¶ He asked, Well?

¶ “Hey, ” she said, “wait. ” She fidgeted with her rings. ¶ “Well?

¶ “Hey, ” she said, “wait. ” She fidgeted with her rings. ¶ “Well? ” he asked.

¶ “Hey, ” she said, “wait. ” ¶ He glanced up at her. “Well?

¶ “Hey, ” she said, “wait. ” ¶ He glanced up at her. “Well? ”

oh Anita cried with fright. has it really come to this she asked me

oh Anita cried with fright. has it really come to this she asked me yes, I’m afraid it has, dear I muttered I love you do you she couldn’t look at me. I grabbed her face and yelled look at me please leave me she sputtered it’s over

“Oh!” Anita cried with fright. “Has it really come to this? ” she asked

“Oh!” Anita cried with fright. “Has it really come to this? ” she asked me. “Yes, I’m afraid it has, dear. ” I muttered, “I love you. ” “Do you? ” She couldn’t look at me. I grabbed her face and yelled, “Look at me!” “Please leave me, ” she sputtered. “It’s over. ”

Dialogue Revision “What’re you doing here? ” Adam asks, wiping his greasy hands on

Dialogue Revision “What’re you doing here? ” Adam asks, wiping his greasy hands on a rag. “I guess I have a problem. ” “I’m working. ” He nods his chin toward the chassis. “What is it? ” “Everything. Nothing. It can’t wait. ” He sighs and walks toward the door of the garage. “I guess I’m kind of pregnant. ”