¶ “Hey, ” she said, “wait. ” She fidgeted with her rings. ¶ “Well? ” he asked.
¶ “Hey, ” she said, “wait. ” ¶ He glanced up at her. “Well? ”
oh Anita cried with fright. has it really come to this she asked me yes, I’m afraid it has, dear I muttered I love you do you she couldn’t look at me. I grabbed her face and yelled look at me please leave me she sputtered it’s over
“Oh!” Anita cried with fright. “Has it really come to this? ” she asked me. “Yes, I’m afraid it has, dear. ” I muttered, “I love you. ” “Do you? ” She couldn’t look at me. I grabbed her face and yelled, “Look at me!” “Please leave me, ” she sputtered. “It’s over. ”
Dialogue Revision “What’re you doing here? ” Adam asks, wiping his greasy hands on a rag. “I guess I have a problem. ” “I’m working. ” He nods his chin toward the chassis. “What is it? ” “Everything. Nothing. It can’t wait. ” He sighs and walks toward the door of the garage. “I guess I’m kind of pregnant. ”