Great Changes in Our Country Great changes have

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习作实况 Great Changes in Our Country Great changes have been (1) taken place in

习作实况 Great Changes in Our Country Great changes have been (1) taken place in our country. Many buildings have been builded(2) in cities and towns,even at villages. The more cars we have,the more crowded the roads are. So the roads are become (3) wider and wider. Many overpasses have been builded(4) in big cities. Chinese people’s life is better now. We can buy things that we need in every part of the country. We have TVs,washing machines fridges, computers,cars,etc. These things couldn’t buy (5) twenty years ago. We‘ll Study harder and make our country stronger and more beautiful.

「优秀范文」 Great Changes in Our Country Great changes have taken place in our country.

「优秀范文」 Great Changes in Our Country Great changes have taken place in our country. Many buildings have been built in cities and towns, even at villages. The more cars we have, the more crowded the roads are. So the roads have become wider and wider. Many overpasses have been built in big cities. Chinese people‘s life is better now. We can buy things that we need in every part of the country. We have TVs,washing machines,fridges, computers,cars and so on. These things couldn’t be bought twenty years ago. We‘ll study harder and make our country stronger and more beautiful.

内容要点: 1. Doing a lot of homework, the students could review what they had

内容要点: 1. Doing a lot of homework, the students could review what they had learned. 2. It would also help to develop the students’ minds and stop them playing computer games. 3. But a few parents thought that too much homework was useless. 4. Because doing much homework took a lot of time. 5. Students could not have a good rest. 6. They could not do the things they liked. 7. In my opinion, doing some suitable homework is necessary and helpful.

One possible version: Last week our class had a parents’ meeting. At the meeting,

One possible version: Last week our class had a parents’ meeting. At the meeting, all the parents talked about whether doing a lot of homework was useful or not. Many parents thought that doing much homework was useful. They thought by doing a lot of homework, the students could review what they had learned. It would also help to develop the students’ minds and stop them playing computer games. But a few parents thought that too much homework was useless. Because doing much homework took a lot of time and thus students could not have a good rest. What’s more, they could not do the things they liked. In my opinion, doing some suitable homework is necessary and helpful.

五、学生需重点掌握的作文话题 l l l l l 个人情况(Personal information) 学校生活(School life) 兴趣与爱好(Interests and hobbies) 个人情感(Emotions)

五、学生需重点掌握的作文话题 l l l l l 个人情况(Personal information) 学校生活(School life) 兴趣与爱好(Interests and hobbies) 个人情感(Emotions) 人际关系(Interpersonal relationships) 节假日活动(Festivals, holidays and celebrations) 健康(Health) 文娱与体育(Entertainment and sports) 语言学习(Language learning) 热点话题(Topic issues)

中学生的爱好与兴趣 spare time,watch TV, interest, appetite, taste, read novels, play football / basketball, hobby,

中学生的爱好与兴趣 spare time,watch TV, interest, appetite, taste, read novels, play football / basketball, hobby, surf the internet, chat online, play games, collect stamps, make e-friends, climb mountains, favorite be fond of, be interested in, develop an interest in, have love for, have a taste in, enjoy popular music

人际、环境和谐 friendly, honest, credible , peaceful, live in harmony, help each ether, care for

人际、环境和谐 friendly, honest, credible , peaceful, live in harmony, help each ether, care for each other, have deep love for , be concerned with , take an active part in, protect the environment, save water, No pains, no gains If everyone … for others and the society, our world will be … Every one should … and devotes himself to building our motherland into a strong country. ,

推荐或申请 look for, take in, full-time, part-time, well-paid, subjects, healthy, address, apply for, graduate

推荐或申请 look for, take in, full-time, part-time, well-paid, subjects, healthy, address, apply for, graduate from, scholarship, good grades, hobby, favorite, be skilled in, be good at, experienced, confident, English and computer ability

中学生的健康问题 physical and mental condition, strong, un/healthy, overweight/fat, thin, near/short-sighted, energetic, unhealthy eating habit,

中学生的健康问题 physical and mental condition, strong, un/healthy, overweight/fat, thin, near/short-sighted, energetic, unhealthy eating habit, eat much junk food , stay /keep healthy / fit, build up one’s body / improve one’s' health, enough sleep, take regular exercise, proper diet, good living habits, lose weight, remove heavy burdens, be good for/do good to, go on diet, form a … eating habit,

环境保护 fresh air, pollute, waste is scattering here and there. protect the environment, send

环境保护 fresh air, pollute, waste is scattering here and there. protect the environment, send out smoke into the air, cut down trees, pour waste water into the rivers, form good habits to protect the surroundings, take good care of the forests, take active measures to protect the plants animals, plant more trees to improve the environment , It is a shame to throw rubbish around. The terrible pollution have done great harm to us as well as to the nature

校园文明与安全问题 school rules , obey, behave well, be neatly dressed, respect the teachers and

校园文明与安全问题 school rules , obey, behave well, be neatly dressed, respect the teachers and parents, be on time, keep the environment clean, civilized, break the rules, spit, discipline, throw rubbish everywhere, cheat in the exam, get in line , fight with sb. , punish sb. for The students are told not to break any of the rules of the school. , The students are expected to … , It must be made clear that the students should … It is shameful to … , What we should do is that … , ,

友谊 get to know sb. , know sb. really well, make friends with sb.

友谊 get to know sb. , know sb. really well, make friends with sb. , a strong personality , personal matters, friendship, friendly, a close friend, trust each other , worthy, share …with sb. , keep in touch with sb. , understanding Friends give us … 1. A good friend is someone you can 2. Friendship plays an important part in … You can … to be a good friend. … makes a good friend. … A friend in need is a friend indeed.

七、谋篇布局的常用佳句 1. ※ ※ ※ ※ ※ 比较性的文章常用的句子 Every coin has two sides. Different

七、谋篇布局的常用佳句 1. ※ ※ ※ ※ ※ 比较性的文章常用的句子 Every coin has two sides. Different people have different ideas. On the one hand…on the other hand… For one thing… for another… There is no doubt that… It is well known that… As we all know that… In my opinion, we should… As far as I am concerned, I think … As for me…

2. 开始段落常用的句子 ※ As the saying goes… ※ It is well known that… ※

2. 开始段落常用的句子 ※ As the saying goes… ※ It is well known that… ※ The chart/ table shows that… ※ Some/many people say/believe that … ※ It is quite clear that …but… ※ There are many views about… ※ It has been decided that… ※ It is natural that… ※ It is true that… ※ According to the figure/number in the chart, it can be seen that…

3. 主题段落常用的句型 u First, second, third, finally u For one thing…for another… u One

3. 主题段落常用的句型 u First, second, third, finally u For one thing…for another… u One the one hand, on the other hand… u Another factor is… u There is no doubt that… u But the trouble/problem/point is… u What is more important, u No matter how… u I don’t think it is a very good way to…

4. 结尾段落常用的句型 p As for me/in my opinion… p As far as I am

4. 结尾段落常用的句型 p As for me/in my opinion… p As far as I am concerned… p In a word/in short p From this point of view, … p It can be concluded that… p On the whole, … p Generally speaking, … p As has been stated, … p As I have shown, …

5. 常用的语篇连接词 表示递进 and, and then, also, besides, in addition, moreover, one more, once

5. 常用的语篇连接词 表示递进 and, and then, also, besides, in addition, moreover, one more, once more, what’s more, even, what was worse , meanwhile… 表示转折 but, however, yet, and yet, although, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand, otherwise… 表示结果 so, therefore, thus, as a result, …

表示时间 now, then, later, next, finally, soon, before long, after that, up till now,

表示时间 now, then, later, next, finally, soon, before long, after that, up till now, just then, so far, at present, recently, after a while, in a few days, at first, suddenly, to begin with, immediately, soon, in the beginning, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, meanwhile, the moment ,from now on, from then on, at the same time, till, not…until, before, after, when, while 表示目的 for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,

表示并列关系 or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both…

表示并列关系 or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or, neither …nor 表示因果关系 because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, therefore, as a result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that 表示列举说明 for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, and so on, according to this, believe it or not, to tell you the truth

表示强调: above all, after all, at least, indeed, in fact, surely, certainly, of course…

表示强调: above all, after all, at least, indeed, in fact, surely, certainly, of course… 表示结论: finally, at last, in the end, in a word, in general, generally speaking, in short, as you know…