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起:first of all, to begin with, above all. . . 承:in addition, besides. . . 巧妙串联 转:however, on the other hand. . . 合:in my opinion, all in all, in a word. . .
蠢错不犯:初中二年级学生就应该掌握的 基本语言表达能力。 1. I very like the book. 2. He was very angrily. 3. There have many student in the classroom. 4. The car is yellow color.
中学生英语写作中常见的14种语言错误: 1. 主谓不一致 My father and I likes going fishing by the lake. Large quantities of soil has been washed away.
2. 时态、语态混用 Last night, I had enjoyed a party. The painting on the wall∧damaged seriously. was
3. 句子成分残缺 I stood up and saw there∧a boy. was The young man∧running in the street. was
4. 习惯搭配误用 I once heard from the animal like this. of We passed away the building. by
5. 名词单、复数不分 I made many friend in the summer camp. We can get some informations from the Internet.
6. 动词单、复数不分 Our teacher often say that success lie in hard work. Mr. Smith, together with some students, are coming to our school.
7. 赘词现象多发 I hope you can return back to our school soon. We'll hold a party on next Sunday.
8. 近义词的误用 The school requests that all the students should wear the school uniform. I quarreled with my teacher about my grades.
9. 基本词汇拼写错误 I flied to New York directly from Beijing. This will be done immediatly.
10. 前后人称不一致 The boy was born in a poor family but she works hard. We watched a few movies and we loved it.
11. 动词原形作主语/宾语 Take a walk after dinner is very good for you. At that moment, I didn't feel like take a walk.
12. 逻辑主语与主句主语不一致 Preparing dinner, the doorbell rang. Walking in the street, a car hit an old man.
13. 一个简单句出现两个谓语 There was no work to do, he went back home. being ∧I received your email, ∧I was very excited. When and
14. 中式英语 Next week have a party. I sorry you I can't with you go Beijing.
第一反应测试: 他是个好人。 He is a good man. generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable, easygoing, devoted, open-minded, modest, friendly…
对不起,我不能和你一起去北京了。 Would you accept my heartfelt apology that I can’t make it to Beijing with you as we have planned. I’m sorry that I can’t go to Beijing with you. I sorry you I can’t with you go Beijing.
适应 • • fit in adapt to adjust to cope with … be used to be accustomed to feel at home …
存点钱是很重要的。 There is no denying/ It is beyond any dispute that depositing some money in the bank is crucial. Sometimes, whether you have money at hand means the difference of life or death for a loved one.
(2)运用了大量的表达强烈� 点句式(� 气太� ): I hold the point of view that There is no doubt that … I strongly believe that … I am firmly convinced that (there will be exciting and wonderful changes in …/it gives me a strong body) It goes without saying that … What I want to stress is that (health is very important to us)
(3)运用了大量的总结、转换、强调、转折等语气、句式,不 够得体。 All in all, … / Generally speaking, As a matter of fact, As for my spare time, … As far as I am concerned, I hope become a doctor. When it comes to my own family, it occurs to me that I will have 2 children. It is known to us that family is the most important thing in our life. On the one hand, … on the other hand…
(4)运用了大量的强调句和倒装句,给人非常生涩的感觉。 In my spare time, so active am I that I will go fishing with my family. It is after ten years that… (5)在同一篇短文里,堆砌了大量同样的句式: It’s I that want to be a teacher; It is I that am fond on children. It is I that like making a lot of friends. It is famous city that I’ll go to… (6)中式英语,意思相差较大, 或完全不达意。 Lover Organize a family I hope my will be little speak English.
那些能稍微充满想象的句子,就显得难能可贵: …My two sons surrounding me smile like sunshine. …On weekends, I will take my family to the beach to have a rest, enjoying the sun rises. … go out for a picnic, hugging the nature and strengthening our emotion …clever and optimistic, my daughter is going to be the sort of girl who spread sunshine to others through her smile. …Love can add delightful color to life.
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