Exciting Penultimate Leaflet Day Remember your AR tests
Exciting Penultimate Leaflet Day • Remember your AR tests… • I have had a look online, and the following people still need to do some work on their targets… (i. e. they are at 0%)! Millie, Daisy C, Delilah, Freddie, Sophie, Taimen, Leighton, Austin, Belle, Maisie, Jenson and Phoebe.
Look at the detail in the bullet points!
Bespoke language choice!
Great introduction Accommodation line Luxury 5* accommodation in both our lodges and tree houses for the ultimate comfort during your stay with us after you action packed days, each type includes: Queen sized beds with luxury furnishings Super fast wifi in every room 50 m Tv In every room Xbox with Netflix in every room Hot tubs
Amazing – NEEDS PUNCTUATION!
Day 4 – Finalise Your Other Sections • • Introduction Food/Dining/Restaurants Location/Local Area Facilities Entertainment Accommodation Something else?
You have used bullet points, so you can’t use these again. So, what do you do? • Think about one section that uses ; for an extended list? • Think about a section that ‘oozes’ description/similes/personification/metaphors • Think about the use of rhetorical questions • What about a section that covers the age ranges, can you do some comparison? EXTRA OPTIONALS… Directions (map), Quotes from famous people who have visited, Did you know/Extra info boxes or bubbles…
Hotel Leaflets • • • • Adjectives Spectacular Ultimate Perfect Stunning Unique Exciting Interactive Adventurous Unforgettable Exclusive Memorable Immersive • • • • Relaxed Immersed Magical Wild Delicious Fancy Swashbuckling Fully-themed Chaos Designated Colourful Organised Great • • • Convenient Amazing High-speed Premium Enjoyable Fast-track Luxury Standard Expected firmly
verbs • • Accommodate Venture Share Making Spark Swimming Brimming Imagine • • Interact Beat Dine Relax Ensure Understand Suit
Other words • • • Themed Inspiring Complimentary Unforgettable Grand Spacious Elegant Mythical Breathtaking • Joyful • spooky
Day 4 – Finalise Your Other Sections • • Introduction Food/Dining/Restaurants Location/Local Area Facilities Entertainment Accommodation Something else?
You have used bullet points, so you can’t use these again. So, what do you do? • Think about one section that uses ; for an extended list? • Think about a section that ‘oozes’ description/similes/personification/metaphors • Think about the use of rhetorical questions • What about a section that covers the age ranges, can you do some comparison? EXTRA OPTIONALS… Directions (map), Quotes from famous people who have visited, Did you know/Extra info boxes or bubbles…
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