Example paragraph advance topic sentence controlling idea controlling

Example paragraph: advance • 효과적인 예시는 구체적이고 topic sentence의 controlling idea 와 명확한 관계가 있어야 합니다. • 효과적인 예시는 단순히 controlling idea를 재진술하는 것이 아 니고 더 새로운 정보를 제공해야 합니다. Ex) Carl is a good neighbor controlling idea He is a wonderful person to live by. For example, he always invites people from our neighborhood over for dinner. He believe that being good to the near is a basic step of being good for the human. So he started inviting when he was twenty years old. He prepares very good chicken pie and spaghetti to treat his neighbor. So all people like him and they also try to be a good neighbor.