Criterion a topic sentence supporting sentences topic sentence

● Criterionの有効な使い方 a) 適切なパラグラフ（段落）構成を用いて書きましょう！ ・ topic sentence ・・・ その段落でもっとも言いたいことを述べている文 ⇒ パラグラフの最初に来る（ことが多い） ・ supporting sentences ・・・ topic sentenceで述べたことを詳細に説明する文 ⇒ 理由や具体例などを用いて詳しい説明をする ・ concluding sentence ・・・ パラグラフの結論となる文 ⇒ topic sentenceと同内容を念押しする文 b) 同じ表現を使うのをなるべく避けましょう！ The conditions under which many teachers work are abominable. Many of the teachers in our school don't have offices or telephones. This makes it difficult for the teachers to contact students' parents to discuss different issues. Many teachers don't even have their own classrooms, … The conditions under which many teachers work are abominable. Many of the instructors in our school don't have offices or telephones. This makes it difficult for them to contact students' parents to discuss different issues. Many educators don't even have their own classrooms, … c) ある程度の分量を書きましょう！ ⇒ スコア 4を目指すには 300語以上、スコア 5以上を目指すには 350語以上が目安です。