In your Writer’s Notebook: Tell me, which would you rather be? Justify your response by explaining the differences in the words. – – – Sophisticated or elegant Skinny or slim Frugal or thrifty A problem solver or a conniving person A take-charge person or a controlling person Stubborn or strong-willed
“Maybe Dats Youwr Pwoblem Too” • Read the poem “Maybe Dats Youwr Pwoblem Too” by Jim Hall. • Answer the following questions on the poem handout: 1. What do you notice about the word choices in the poem? 2. What else do you notice? 3. What sticks with you? 4. What effect does this have? 5. What did you notice that you might try in your writing?
Discussion • Misspellings (why)? • Font – upper case for the word SPIDERMAN, contrast between the simple vocabulary and the sophisticated idea of our suits or reputations • The purpose of the question at the end of the poem
Quick write response • In your Writer’s Notebook, respond to the following: • What connection do you make to one of these three issues, brought up in the poem: personal problems, world problems, or reputation.
What does Jim Hall have to say? • http: //jameswhall. blogspot. com/2008/01/ma ybe-dats-your-pwoblem-too. html
Exit Slips • Pick one word from the poem and explain its connotation using words, pictures, or a combination of words and pictures. • Pass it in when you are finished.