Comments on language Negative comments Good comments Some

Comments on language Negative comments Good comments “Some voices could be higher” “Extra weight needed on gossip corner” “The anchor has a good tone of voice and is formal and serious” “The presenter of the Gossip corner’s voice is really enthusiastic” “Anchor sounds upset and down which fits the story of Haiti” “Good tone of voice for main news and clear voices” “Like the idea of asking the audience for traffic details” “the stories were given an appropriate amount of time and weight” “the script is good “ “anchors voice fits well with the bed” “All stories have a good match to the audience as all are teen related” “structure works well with ending on the weather “ “Good change for sports news” “Good language used in gossip corner the stories are relevant” “good serious tone for hard news” “Good interview questions to get informtive answers” The comments hear are mostly good , we chose Ellie as the anchor as her voice seemed the most formal so we are glad it came across that way similarly with Steph we chose for her to do the gossip corners as her voice was relaxed and chatty. Some of the comments are contracting thee is “the stories were given an appropriate amount of time and weight” and “Extra weight needed on gossip corner” we agree that the stories in gossip were short however we wanted to keep it this way as we felt it was only a small section of the broadcast.