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高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) What do you see in this comic? What does the comic reflect? What is your opinion about the social phenomenon? Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) kid Know ignore desire SOS Surfer obey stress commitment of murder Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) How to organize the passage of this kind l l l Describe the content of the comic Explain the social phenomenon causes and effects Personal opinions Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Describe the comic by using the following structure: • As is shown in the comic, … • We can see in this comic that… • This comic shows us such a fact/phenomenon that… Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Para 1: description of the comic: In this comic, we can see the long-desired summer holiday is coming. But what wait for kids is not a happy and worry-free holiday, but mountains of homework as well as various extra courses, which come from both schools and all kinds of training organizations outside. We can expect kids will not enjoy their summer holiday but suffer too much from these extra burden. Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Explain this social phenomenon by using the following structures: This is a common phenomenon. Nowadays, …. First, … Second… what’s worse, … Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Para 2. Explanation to this social phenomenon: Our kids are suffering too much because of the high expectation of their parents and severe competition from today's society. What’s worse, some schools and training organizations take advantages of this situation to make money by providing all kinds of training courses. Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Express your own attitude : In my opinion/ As far as I’m concerned/ Speaking for myself, …should …. Besides/In addition, … Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Para 3. your opinion on this matter As far as I am concerned, it is high time for us to free kids from the terrible burden and create a colorful childhood for them. Otherwise, it will surely have a negative effect on children’s development. Only in this way, can we expect a bright future of our kids, and our country. Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Let’s enjoy the excellent sentences from your assignment: ( 佳句欣赏 ) Nowadays many people are afraid to go to hospitals if they fall ill. The first thing they think is to go to drugstores to buy medicines. They don’t want to go to hospitals only if the illness is very serious. (黄瑞初 ) Nowadays, when many people have small illnesses, they prefer to go to the chemist’s shop rather than go to the hospital. (郭玮玮 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Let’s enjoy the excellent sentences from your assignment: ( 佳句欣赏 ) Vividly, the picture reflects a serious phenomenon in present society that more and more doctors become fond of money rather than the health of the patients. (史薇薇) People don’t like to go to hospitals because of not only the high price of medicines but also the bad medical service. (姚笛) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Let’s enjoy the excellent sentences from your assignment: ( 佳句欣赏 ) As is shown in the cartoon, money is more important than patients to hospitals…. High price of the drugs and the bad service of the hospital are the reasons why people don’t like to go the hospital. (李凯虹) This is a common phenomenon that the hospital put profit in first place. (李菁菁 ) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Let’s enjoy the excellent sentences from your assignment: ( 佳句欣赏 ) In my opinion, an effective solution for the problem is to transform the way of medical treatment and our government should improve the public service. (梁乔斐) Fortunately, the government is adopting some steps to improve the situation. (王蕾) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Let’s enjoy the excellent sentences from your assignment: ( 佳句欣赏 ) Now there are hospitals of various sizes in all corners of the country, but in common people’s mind, seeing a doctor is still inconvenient and uncomfortable. (乌也茜) It is a result of the high price of medicine and the poor medical service. (邱晶晶) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Let’s enjoy the excellent sentences from your assignment: ( 佳句欣赏 ) …. but most of hospitals are putting profit above conscience just like what the above cartoon reflects : a hospital’s treating a person just depends on the person’s money. (朱华妲) Only when we have a serious illness will we go to the hospital. (毛欣怡) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Let’s correct the errors appearing in your essays: ( 你错我改) � • As is shown in the comic, which the patient lying on the bed asked…. • Another reason why people don’t want to go to hospitals is∧the price of medicine is too high. that • It will make bad influence on our society. have a Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Let’s correct the errors appearing in your essays: ( 你错我改) • The service to patients is not so well. good � • The old woman asked the doctor that “Doctor, may I leave the hospital? ” • They will go to the hospital only when have a having serious illness. Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Let’s correct the errors appearing in your essays: ( 你错我改) • … but the doctor asked the woman how much �she have. money did had • They will∧go to the hospital unless they get serious illnesses. not � • The comic displays that the � people who don’t like to go to hospitals because of the high price of medicine and the bad medical service. Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Let’s correct the errors appearing in your essays: ( 你错我改) • In my opinion, with the problem solving, people can enjoy a convenient and cheap medical service. solved • Many people when they have got a small disease they � would rather go to drugstores than go to the hospital. • The hospital’s aim is∧help the patients. to Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Let’s correct the errors appearing in your essays: ( 你错我改) • I think what the government have to do is declining the price of the medicine. to decline • Only is these ways, ∧the patients like the grandma in the cartoon will be glad. • People have no choice∧to go to the hospital when they are seriously ill. but Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Learn to improve your expression 普通表达方式 高级表达方式 In my opinion As far as I’m concerned, as for myself Speaking for myself , in my view, We should…. First, … Second… we are supposed to, it’s necessary / essential that for one thing…for another… on one hand…, on the other hand… In fact in reality actually as a matter of fact If…, we will… Only if…will we… I’m sure… I’m fully convinced that, practically I strongly believe that Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Six principles of making sentences 1. advanced words (高级词汇原则) 2. adverbial advanced (状语提前原则) 3. phrases preferred (短语优先原则) 4. compound sentence, composite sentence and sentence of special kind (并列句、复合句和特殊句式原则) 5. long and short sentences alternately (长短句交替原则) 6. passages in paragraphs(短文分段分层原则) Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) Five characteristics of outstanding writing: 1. sense of order (条理性: 段落完整，层次分明） 2. accuracy (准确性: 语法准确，用词精当） 3. fluency (流畅性: 层次清晰，行文连贯） 4. conciseness & variety (简洁、多样性） 5. ideological content (思想性: 文章立意高，表 达个人观点内容积极向上） Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions

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高三英语写作指导(看图写作篇) The end Thanks for your attention Enjoy the comics and improve our compositions