Can I plan and write an advert for

Can I plan and write an advert for my wand using persuasive techniques?

Adjectives and persuasive phrases

Introduction: What are you selling? - Hook the listener in - Rhetorical questions x 3 - Introduce the shop Is your wand always letting you down? Are you struggling to cast spells? Are you ready to have the wand that you truly deserve? Then you’re in luck! Ollivanders, the award winning wand shop, has an extensive selection of wands just for you. What are you waiting for?

Attractions of your wand: - Introduce your wand What features / powers does it have? What is useful about it? What can you do with it? Personal appeal Boasts / exaggeration Alliteration We pride ourselves on consistently improving our products and we are proud to introduce our latest (and most exciting) design - The Excel 3000! The Excel 3000, which combines the two rarest elements, will take your magical abilities to a new level. At its core we have blended the perfect mix of unicorn hair and phoenix feathers to make the most powerful wand around. You will be the envy of all your friends. The intricate design not only makes it the most visually appealing wand on the market but the unique combination of ingredients allows the grip to mould perfectly to your hand. No spell will be out of reach with The Excel 3000! You are guaranteed to become the best wizard/witch around.

Useful information: - How much do they cost? Special offers / deals? For a limited time only, when you purchase this extraordinary wand you get all the set books for the term ahead for free! It sounds too good to be true but The Excel 3000 is within your reach. Do you really want to miss out? Reviews and Ratings Why should people buy these? - Statistics - Quotes Unsurprisingly, 100% of buyers agree it is the best wand they have ever owned. Dumbledore (the most powerful and respected wizard of them all) said that every student needs The Excel 3000. Ending What do you want people to do now? - Modal verbs - Slogan So don’t delay, come and visit us today. To be the best you need the best … The Excel 3000!

Is your wand always letting you down? Are you struggling to cast spells? Are you ready to have the wand that you truly deserve? Then you’re in luck! Ollivanders, the award winning wand shop, has an extensive selection of wands just for you. What are you waiting for? We pride ourselves on consistently improving our products and we are proud to introduce our latest (and most exciting) design - The Excel 3000! The Excel 3000, which combines the two rarest elements, will take your magical abilities to a new level. At its core we have blended the perfect mix of unicorn hair and phoenix feathers to make the most powerful wand around. You will be the envy of all your friends. The intricate design not only makes it the most visually appealing wand on the market but the unique combination of ingredients allows the grip to mould perfectly to your hand. No spell will be out of reach with The Excel 3000! You are guaranteed to become the best wizard/witch around. For a limited time only, when you purchase this extraordinary wand you get all the set books for the term ahead for free! It sounds too good to be true but The Excel 3000 is within your reach. Do you really want to miss out? Unsurprisingly, 100% of buyers agree it is the best wand they have ever owned. Dumbledore (the most powerful and respected wizard of them all) said that every student needs The Excel 3000. So don’t delay, come and visit us today. To be the best you need the best … The Excel 3000!