begining Main body conclusion Heavy Haze The winter
作文结构 begining _______ 文章结构 Main body _______ conclusion _______
【例题精讲】 Heavy Haze The winter in 2013 impressed people not for its extreme coldness but the heavy haze hanging over 25 provinces. It caused great disturbance to our daily life. Obviously, haze comes from pollution. Many factories let the smoke into the air without any filtering process. Day by day, it is no wonder that smoke, dirt, and dust accumulate in the air and finally turn into dense haze. How can we curb haze then? Levying heavy penalty on those irresponsible factories is definitely a must-do. Before the air is once again purified, we should also take some actions to protect ourselves such as wearing a mask and reducing exposure outdoors. We should all try our best to contribute to a cleaner environment for mutual survival and easier life. (126 words
Beginning Topic Sentence: It caused great disturbance to our daily life. TS 1: Obviously, haze comes from pollution. Heavy Haze Main Body TS 2: How can we curb haze then? Conclusion . . . try our best to contribute to a cleaner environment. . .
【知识梳理2】 议论文写作之——遣词造句 My school is in the west of the city. My school lies in the west of the school. My school is located in the west of the city. 遣词 同义词法: You can easily remember these words if you use them every day. You’ll have no trouble/difficulty remembering these words if you use them every day. The party is very successful. The party is a great success. The party is of great success. If the weather is fine, we’ll go hill climbing tomorrow. Weather permitting, we’ll go hill climbing tomorrow. 构词法: 同义结构替换法:
造句 l There is no doubt that + 句子 (毫无疑问的……) l An advantage of … is that + 句子 (……的优点是……) l The reason why + 句子is that + 句子 (……的原因是……) l The more…the more… (愈……愈……) l It is +adj. of/for sb. to do sth. (做…是怎么样…) l spare no effort to do =do one's utmost to do = try one's best to do (尽全力去……) l have a great influence on… l It is said (that)+ 句子 (对……有很大的影响) (据说…)
结 构 关 联 词 并 列 与 递 进 : and, also, as well as, besides, moreover, in addition, what’s more, etc. 转折: but, however, although, etc. 对比: or, while, instead of, on the other hand, on the contrary, etc. 因果: because, as, for, since, so, thus, therefore, as a result, because of, etc. 总结: in brief, in a (one) word, in general, in short, on the whole, generally speaking, etc. 顺序: and then, next, after that, firstly, secondly, and finally, lastly, etc.
范文赏析 My View on E-books Nowadays E-books become more and more popular but the attitude towards to Ebooks differs. As far as I am concerned, e-books are helpful because of the following reasons. Firstly, e-books are very convenient. With the little body size, we can put it in the pocket and go anywhere with them. In this way, we have much time to read books and enlarge our knowledge. Besides, e-books can combine study and entertainment perfectly. With its various function, we can use it not only for learning but also for fun. Furthermore, ebook can play the role of friends. It gives us books to read, it plays games with us. What is more, we can put many things we like into it and so on. To sum up, we can draw a conclusion that e-books are very important for us, especially, our young.
范文赏析 What is your favorite cartoon star? I like Mickey Mouse best. The reasons why I consider Mickey Mouse as my favorite cartoon star are as follows: 定�从句 Firstly, I think Mickey Mouse is very cute and smart. He has two big ears and two black eyes. Secondly, Mickey Mouse is always very helpful and kind. He always helps others a lot when his friends are in trouble. He is also very kind to others. Last but not least, I can take pictures with him in the Disney Land play with him. I feel very happy when I am playing with him. In general, these are the reasons why I like Mickey Mouse best. �构关�� 状语从句
beginning 文章三大结构 Main body conclusion
That? ! 2. I think that that student wrote on the blackboard was wrong. ____ 3. I know. You know. I know that you know that I know. ______
was vs saw 4. We must hang together, or 5. Was it a bar or a bat I saw? we'll be hanged separately. _______
6. 2 B or not 2 B, that is a question? _______
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