B The Most Precious Thing in My Room

學測作文寫作方向 (B) 主題寫作 (包括簡函寫作) →先打大綱 以” The Most Precious Thing in My Room”為例 第一段: 主題句: The most precious thing in my (是甚麼) room is a chair. 細節1: It is a gift from my friend. 細節2: It is made of wood and is comfortable. 細節3: It is cool in summer and warm in winter. 第二段: 主題句: The chair is the most precious thing in my (為甚麼) room because of the following reasons. 細節1: First, it is a gift from my best friend. 細節2: Second, I feel relaxed when I sit on it. 細節3: Last, it is always there whenever I need it. 結論句: 重申一次主題句(用不同的字) The chair in my room has a special meaning to me. It is the most precious thing in my room.

如何拿取更高分 (A) 變化句子結構 1. 五大基本英文句型 (a) S+Vi (b) S + Vi + S. C. (c) S + Vt. + O (d) S + Vt. + I. O. + D. O. (e) S+Vt. + O. C. →主詞+ 動詞+(介系詞) +受詞+地方+ 時間+ 方法 2. 分詞構句→He sat there and read books. →He sat there reading books. 3. 分詞片語→I like the girl who wears a hat. →I like the girl wearing a hat. 4. 關係子句→I like the girl. The girl wears a hat. → I like the girl who wears a hat. 5. 疑問句 6. 命令句 7. 感嘆句 (講義Page 4)

如何拿取更高分 (B) 拉長文章的方法→詳述細節(感官細節). ★Tiny paw prints in the wet sand. ★ A powerful earthquake hit a campground yesterday. No serious injuries were reported. Some trees were uprooted, and a bridge was destroyed. John and his sister were scared. (from Houghton Mifflin Reading practice book)

拉長文章的方法→增加細節 A powerful earthquake rocked a campground in the woods in Taitung County yesterday. No serious injuries were reported. Some giant redwoods were uprooted, and a one-hundredyear-old bridge was destroyed. Twelve-year-old John and his six-year -old sister were scared to death.

如何拿取更高分 (D) 精準的動詞 ★Jack left the field. →Nine-year-old Jack slammed down the bat and stormed off the field, feeling too angry to speak. ((from Houghton Mifflin English workbook plus) ★Mary moved across the stage. →Mary crawled across the stage. ★Mary said to me, " I hate you!” →Mary whispered to me, “I hate you. ”

如何拿取更高分 (D) 精準的名詞(講義Page 8) ★For my birthday, I received many things (presents). → For my birthday, I received a nice bag, a book about basketball, and a pair of slippers.

如何拿取更高分 (D) 精準的形容詞. 副詞. 和片語(講義Page 6&7) ★I keep a dog. →I keep a lovely dog. ★That ____ bag holds _____ marbles. ★John sits on the _____ ground to play. ★Mary cooked dinner. →Mary cooked dinner excitedly. ★Monica danced ______ and ______.

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