AUDIENCE REVIEWS CONCLUSION LUCY PEREIRA CONCLUSION After reviewing

AUDIENCE REVIEWS CONCLUSION LUCY PEREIRA

CONCLUSION After reviewing three 16/17 year old girls we, as a group, found that overall the plot of our film would typically be aimed at the female audience as our protagonist is female. The audience is therefore aligned with her character and against the male antagonist. The girls all agreed that they didn’t understand why the man was stalking the women if he was her partner/boyfriend, and Rebecca said that she thinks something bad should happen to add to the action of the film, something for the suspense to build up to. We didn’t want to include to much action, as we all agreed that we didn’t want our film to end up being to much like an action film, or a gory horror film. They liked the idea of the plot in general and believed that the woman’s character would be an innocent youthful looking women, to allow the audience to sympathise with her.

IMPROVEMENTS We plan on getting rid of the antagonist being interested in his partners work in the government as it didn’t seem realistic enough to our targeted audience. We also had not included enough aspects of a political thriller to categorise it under that sub genre. We instead aim to follow the sub genre of a psychological thriller, by including interesting props and focus more on the antagonists way of thinking, rather than the situation itself. To improve our audience reviews and feed back, we need to complete our title sequence and present it to a wider range of people of different ages and genders to see what their opinions on it are.