Agenda OMAM film finish OMAM Quiz Chaps 4

Agenda *OMAM film (finish) *OMAM Quiz Chaps. 4 -6 *IR *Mini-Lesson: Conclusion *Research Paper Work Session: Mini Lessons with small groups based on needed skills/Continue work on RP Body paragraphs

Reminders q Grab your IR books today! We will read after the quiz over OMAM. q Vocab 8 B starts Monday! q OMAM Quiz Chaps 4 -6 – Today! q Blue annotation sheet due today!! q. Research Paper Work Session – Today you should be working on finishing Body Paragraph #3 and starting conclusion!

OMAM Film

Quiz OMAM 4 -6 IR

Research Paper Work Session

Writing a Developed and Detailed Conclusion • Conclusions are just as important as introductions. • The conclusion closes the essay and tries to close the issue. • The aim is to convince the reader that your main argument is the best one on the issue. • You should not present any new arguments in your conclusion.

In conclusion, these marine parks should be closed, or at the very least, no new animals should be captured for marine parks in the future. Society is no longer prepared to tolerate unnecessary cruelty to animals for science and entertainment. If the world continues with these past crimes against marine creatures this society will be remembered as cruel and inhuman by future generations.

Writing a Developed and Detailed Conclusion • Restates thesis – 1 sentence – Should not be an EXACT restatement • Summarize your claims – 1 -2 sentences – Reference all claims • Provides a general warning of the consequences of not following the proposed change/thesis that you suggested (1 -2 sentences) OR • a general statement of how the community will benefit from following that proposed change (1 -2 sentences)

In conclusion, these marine parks should be closed, or at the very least, no new animals should be captured for marine parks in the future. Society is no longer prepared to tolerate unnecessary cruelty to animals for science and entertainment. If the world continues with these past crimes against marine creatures this society will be remembered as cruel and inhuman by future generations.