Adding Commentary Commentary Commentary is relating your detail

Adding Commentary!

Commentary • Commentary is relating your detail to you thesis statement. • It is NOT repeating what you just said in the detail. • GOOD EXAMPLE: – Detail: Nepal has a lot of different types of meats that include mutton, beef, and goat. They use special seasons on these meats. – Commentary: Obviously, without these special spices the meats of Nepal would taste quite bland • BAD EXAMPLE: – Detail: Nepal has a lot of different types of meats that include mutton, beef and goat. – Commentary: It is clear that people in Nepal eat many different kinds of meats like mutton, beef, and goat.

Thesis statement: Chocolate chip cookies are the best cookies in the world because they are gooey on the inside, they are easy to bake, and extra ingredients can be added for additional flavor. • Body Paragraph #2: • Because they are effortless to make and take minimal ingredients, chocolate chip cookies are the superior cookie. Chocolate chip cookies are so easy that even a child can make them. In fact, the most common cookie that children make is the chocolate chip cookie because the step-by-step process of adding the sugar, flour, butter, egg, and chocolate chips is incredibly basic. It is easy to see why these cookies are a favorite because of their simplicity. Another reason why chocolate chip cookies are favored over all other cookies is because of their minimal ingredients. Many cookies complicated to make and take a lot of time and money to gather ingredients. The chocolate chip cookie, however, has only five ingredients that are usually found in everyone’s kitchen. The small amount of ingredients makes for an uncomplicated recipe. Therefore, chocolate chip cookies are the greatest cookie because of their easy baking construction and their limited ingredients.

Thesis statement: Chocolate chip cookies are the best cookies in the world because they are gooey on the inside, they are easy to bake, and extra ingredients can be added for additional flavor. • Body Paragraph #3: • Chocolate chip cookies are great to eat because one can add more flavors to spice up the cookies. The first most common extra ingredient that can be added to chocolate chip cookies are walnuts. Walnuts add a nutty flavor and contrasts well with the sweetness of the chocolate. ______________________________________________________. The second most common ingredient added to chocolate chip cookies are caramel chunks. Caramel chunks became popular during the 1960 s when caramel became more easily accessible to the public. ______________________________________________________. All in all, there a plethora of additional ingredients that can be used to make chocolate chip cookies even more dynamic and delicious.