2020 Paragraph 2 From my perspective the significance

2020南京盐城高三一模： Paragraph 2: 谈谈你如何看待教育惩戒权，并简述理由 From my perspective, the significance of school discipline cannot be stressed too much. For one thing, the regulation will help students better understand the consequences of misbehaving, which is of great benefit to their healthy growth and development. For another, the regulation can delegate more power to teachers, who shoulder pressure in dealing with misbehaving students.

常用衔接词汇和短语 besides, similarly, furthermore, what's more, moreover, on top of that, in addition, plus 表示转折 however, nevertheless, nonetheless, on the contrary, in/by contrast, conversely, yet, but, on the other hand, though 表示顺序、 first(ly), second(ly), to begin with, first of all, 层次和时间 last but not least, then, For one thing, . . . For another, . . . , previously, meanwhile, concurrently, at the same time, simultaneously 表示补充

常用衔接词汇和短语 表示因果 表示举例 表示归纳 和总结 therefore, hence, consequently, thus, as a result, in consequence, accordingly for example, for instance, in this case, on this occasion, under this situation in brief, to sum up, to conclude, in conclusion, in a word, in short, generally speaking, generally

英语段落论述展开的技巧： 1. 结构角度： 主题句 Topic Sentence 有 效 衔 接 支撑句 1 Supporting Sentence 1 支撑句 2 Supporting Sentence 2 支撑句 3 Supporting Sentence 3 …

2018年江苏高考作文: 谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用 2 -3个理由 或论据支撑你的看法。 Paragraph 2: I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I 主�句 – �点 purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the 次主�句 1—排名高意味着 product, or better service. �量高和服�更好 Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. 支撑句—例�思�：�包、 看�影、就餐 Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. 次主�句 2—���� For example, there are huge amounts of reference books 支撑句 1– 例�思�：本人 which I am often confused to choose from. 的���� In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy 支撑句 2—�一步从自己� books according to the ratings. �出�引申出�点

Paragraph 3： There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. 主题句--不能完全依赖排名 It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings. 支撑句 2—前后呼应，总结观点 支撑句 1—进一步解释：利弊并 存

原因类： 2017江苏省高考真题（电影票房变化） The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the boxoffice income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth. 2020年 锡慧在线

措施类： 2019无锡市高三上学期期中考试（ 网络文学） Effective measures should be taken to tackle the problem. As for the writers and the platform, they need to form a professional team to write, select and edit the works before publishing them online. In addition, authorities are supposed to make relevant policies to standardize the online market. I’m confident that online works are bound to have a positive impact on young people’s minds.

2019南通二模：理想中的父母教育方式 From my perspective, ideal family education should give high priority to sincere communication and mutual trust. This can bridge the generation gap and contribute to children’s mental growth. (因果思维) Besides, parents should show due respect for children, like accepting the differences and listening to them patiently, ( 例证思维) instead of acting arbitrarily(正反比较思维）. Parents’ arrogance, by contrast, will end up paying a high price. （对比思维）

辨析写作过程中的常见错误 一、语法类错误 1. 动词错误 a. 动词时态语态错误 1. I carefully analyzed the problem and try to work it out in a different way. 正： I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way. 2. According to what has mentioned above, riding a bike to work is a good choice. 正： As has been mentioned above, riding a bike to work is a good choice.

b. 谓语动词错误 1. There are many people support the opinion. 正: There are many people supporting the opinion. 正: There are many people who support the opinion. 2. Help others sometimes means helping oneself. 正: Helping others sometimes means helping oneself.

c. 主谓不一致 1. An aircraft carrier as well as many fighters were destroyed in the battle. 正: An aircraft carrier as well as many fighters was destroyed in the battle. 2. This is one of the most difficult questions that have been asked and she is the only one of the girls who are able to answer it. 正: This is one of the most difficult questions that have been asked and she is the only one of the girls who is able to answer it.

d. 悬垂结构 Dangling Element 1. Last seen wearing a white dress, the police spokesperson said the lost girl was still being sought. 正: Last seen wearing a white dress, the lost girl was still being sought. 2. To improve their spoken English, a course of oral English is necessary. 正: To improve their spoken English, learners need to take a course of oral English.

d. 从句错误 1. As is known to all that he is the best student in our class. 正: As is known to all, he is the best student in our class. 正: It is known to all that he is the best students in our class. 2. With the Internet, we can know everything what happened around the world. 正: With the Internet, we can know whatever happened around the world. 正: With the Internet, we can know everything that happened around the world.

d. 句子结构混乱 1. 连写句(run-on sentence) Our teacher is patient and cheerful thanks to the continuous efforts he has made, our English has improved a lot. 正: Our teacher is patient and cheerful. Thanks to the continuous efforts he has made, our English has improved a lot. 2. 破句 Everyone loves to live a comfortable life. But hate spending much time making money. 正: Everyone loves to live a comfortable life, but hates spending much time making money.

二、词类错误 1. 用词或搭配错误 We hope our country to become more beautiful. 正: We wish our country to become more beautiful. 正: We hope that our country will become more beautiful. You will not fail in Math unless you work harder. 正: You will fail in Math unless you work harder. To my dismay, the plan turned out to be a great success. 正: To my surprise, the plan turned out to be a great success. I objected to have to rewrite the article. 正: I objected to having to rewrite the article.

二、词类错误 2. 非正式语误用 Nobody knows what is gonna happen in the future. 正: Nobody knows what is going to happen in the future. I wanna apply for a position in the HR department. 正: I want to apply for a position in the HR department. Because they have graduated from a famous university, they can get well paid. 正: Because they have graduated from a famous university, they can demand a better salary.

二、词类错误 3. 陈词滥调 You chance of defeating their team is one in a million. 改: You chance of defeating their team is slim. 4. 华而不实的表达 It is a splendid opportunity to communicate with each other. 改: It is a good chance to communicate with each other.

美文佳句精选： 1. Only by knowing that the tools one has through birth need to be used frequently, preparing them for more difficult and challenging use, does one truly and actively approach living life from a strong basis. 只有当一个人天生的能力被使用，被磨砺，为日后所面临的困难和挑战做准 备才能为他/她积极真实地面对生活打下坚实的基础。 2. Taking time to show my compassion in my life has made a difference in my character. It is definitely the ultimate principle to live by. 花一定的时间表达我的情感使我性格得到完善。这绝对是我一生遵循的原则。

3. I want every child to understand that the blessings these brave Americans fight for are not free—that with the great privilege of being a citizen of this nation comes great responsibility. 我希望每个孩子了解：勇敢的美国人为之奋斗的东西从来都要 付出代价——作为这个国家的一员，享受着随之的特权，你就 得承担相应的责任。

4. If you fail but cheer up, looking and moving towards success, the journey from your position to success will be shortened. On the contrary, if you fail and withdraw, you will increase the gap between yourself and success. 5. Feeding your spirit with positive energy can help you stay content in difficult times.

6. Years may wrinkle the skin, but to give up enthusiasm wrinkles the soul. Worry, fear, self-distrust bows the heart and turns the spirit back to dust. 7. We should never lose sight of the value of education, which ought not to be viewed merely as a means of getting knowledge and passing exams, but a process which produces qualified citizens who are morally as well as intellectually enlightened and equipped to behave responsibly in society. 8. Shoot for the moon! Even if you miss, you will land among the stars.

Confidence Caution Calmness 成功秘�： 3 C=S

参考范文： We are shocked to discover in the picture that a water disposal station is such an ornament because polluted water that goes through the station remains untreated and is still drained off directly into rivers and seas. The drawing ironically reflects the insufficient efforts some people have committed against pollution. Several reasons are responsible for the phenomenon. For one thing, quite a few greedy businessmen are always pursuing maximized profits, turning a blind eye to environmental protection. For another, some local officials only care about how to bring about a thriving economy, thus ignoring the importance of environmental protection. They are not aware that the short-sighted action will undermine the economy in the long run. The inadequate efforts to pollution issues are posing a threat to mankind's survival on earth. To prevent the environmental catastrophe, the public should impose great pressure on government to take pollution issues as priorities. Additionally, those who are responsible for the fake facilities should be punished strictly.

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