1 In addition they can help each other

常用表达 1. In addition, they can help each other as well as share the happiness and sadness in their life. 2. When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness. 3. It's very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life. 4. In my opinion, we should keep quiet in public. Also, we should be polite to others. Only in this way can we be persons with good behaviour. 5. When we wait for a bus, we should stand in line.

6. Don't throw litter or spit everywhere. 7. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly. 8. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. 9. If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive. 10. Let's join together to be civilized students!

基础写作 根据中文提示补全句子(每空一词)。 1. 我被这个故事感动了。 I was moved by the story. 2. 政府应该多关注这些孩子们。 The government should pay more attention to 3. 逐渐地, 我们可以一起进步。 Little by little, we can make progress together. the children.

4. 我们应该更加亲切地对待我们的祖父母。 We should treat our own grandparents more kindly 5. 学生考试作弊是不诚实的表现。 It's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams. .

典例分析 假如你是李明, 读完下面的故事后, 表达你的看法, 针对这种社会现象提至少两条建 议。 I am a 14 -year-old boy from a poor village in Fu-yang, Anhui Province. Like many other left-behind children(留守儿童) in China, I live with my grandparents now. My father went to work in Shanghai several years ago. Last year, my mother went there to care for him because his health is not as good as before. They tell me to listen to my grandparents

and call me about twice a month to ask about my study. I really miss my parents and I hope I can afford to go to school in Shanghai. I think every child needs parents' love and care. —Wu Peigen, Anhui Province

【佳作欣赏】 I was moved by the story told by Wu Peigen because I used to be a left-behind child, too. In fact, most left-behind children are looked after by their grandparents, who don't understand how to communicate with the children. As a result, many children may become “problem children”. On the other hand, the grandparents are so helpless in the children's schoolwork, which leads the children to become “poor learners”. In my opinion, the government should pay more attention to the children. And the teachers should often exchange ideas with them. Also, the parents should call their children more often.

One possible version: Last week, we did a survey on students' free-time activities in my school. Here is the result. 22% of the students spend their free time exercising. 11. 5% of the students do volunteer work. 3% of them prefer to hang out with friends. Surprisingly, the result shows that as many as 63. 5% of them always stay at home. If a student always watches TV, uses the computers or studies at home, he or she will become weak. Instead of staying at home, I think

should take more exercise to keep themselves healthy. It's also a good idea for them to watch movies, climb the mountains or ride to the countryside with friends.

[参考词汇] voting on We. Chat(微信投票), canvassing for vote(拉票), unfair(不公平) [注意] (1)短文应包括表中所有内容, 可适当增加细节; (2)你的理由至少两条; (3)词数: 80— 100, 短文开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 Voting on We. Chat is now becoming increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. Would you like to vote for the ones you like on We. Chat? We had a survey about it and here's the result.

One possible version: Voting on We. Chat is now becoming increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. Would you like to vote for the ones you like on We. Chat? We had a survey about it and here's the result. Most students are willing to vote on We. Chat. They think it's interesting, convenient and free to vote on We. Chat. People can use their circle of friends to support the persons they like. While others are unwilling to do that. They think it's unfair and boring, and what's more, it takes much time to do that.

In my opinion, I am against voting on We. Chat. First, it's not safe and personal information is easy to leak. Second, more canvassing for vote can affect feelings. To be honest, it disturbs people's normal life, and makes them get bored.